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Hey Everyone,
So I decided to try my hand at yet another attempt at creating a series. Not sure if it'll materialise this time or not, but I live in eternal hope!
This time its a little unimaginative, I know...
Set in the 'Eric Universe' as it has been dubbed, Xavier Carter is a 'relationship adjuster' where he will help his clients out by removing their female partner, by eating them... I know, shocking right?
Anyway, please do let me know your thoughts below. Your feedback does go a long way towards helping me improve and navigate future stories!
Imgs:
Sophie: https://i.imgur.com/LBW0zIK.jpg
Heather: https://i.imgur.com/l54LE9v.jpg
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Posted by NomNexus 4 years ago Report
So the next story would be him eating Sally then?
Also will you finish that Eric series eventually?
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
I do want to finish up the Eric series, it plagues my mind that I haven't.
Also, its not a guarentee he'll eat Sally or even if he did that it'll make a feature. Who knows? :)
Posted by LordDantai 4 years ago Report
I am eager to give it a read. :D Speaking of new series, I loved Vore Studios, hope that is still on the table to be continued. Keep up the solid work.
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
Vore Studios was a lot of hard work, I won't deny that. It also got its magic thanks to the creative editing by my partner-in-crime who is incredibly unpredictable at the moment and I can't rely on her for editing work at the moment. She was supposed to edit this one, back in September, but that didn't happen alas.
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 4 years ago Report
>To some, the idea of Calvin Layette paying Xavier to eat his current wife because she didn’t quite fit into the image of a successful rich man’s wife and he wanted to trade up to a ‘newer model’ would be despicable. To Xavier, it was almost as regular as popping out for a loaf of bread
Not gonna lie, kinda disappointed you didn't do a "But for Xavier, it was Tuesday."
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
Now that you've pointed that out, I'm disappointed in myself. :/
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 4 years ago Report
Ah, no worries, dude! This was still a pretty damn good read.
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
Thanks :)
Posted by Schrodinger123 4 years ago Report
You think in a world where there are plenty of people who can just randomly decide you people would just start carrying knives as a defense. I guess it would be like that picture of the snake that swallowed an alligator but the alligator wasn’t dead at least not at the time .
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
If you go too far down the road of realism, why aren't predators hunted down by armed mobs? :P Why don't they just eat whatever they can get their hands on, like old ladies, little kiddies, gangsters, plumbers, etc. I think we need a little fantasy in all this, although that isn't a necessarily terrible idea for a story where the prey knows he's coming for her and fights back.
Posted by Schrodinger123 4 years ago Report
Well if they’re smart they would never reveal it to anyone and genetic tests are hard to do and expensive beyond measure as to why they don’t go after anyone they can get probably for the same reason we don’t eat old sheep and instead eat lamb just taste better the only reason why wolves go after injured prey is simply because it’s easier
Posted by chechico 4 years ago Report
This is a good side story to the one on Eric. As not every pred would have the same moral compass this kind of business is likely to pop up.
I like that you did not try to make Xavier feel tortured about it too. He knows what he is and what he is doing.
All in all great story.
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
I think Eric is the polar opposite of what you'd expect a pred to be - almost the Clark Kent of the predator world. He knows he's a pred but tries not to be overtly cruel about what he does.
Xavier isn't wealthy, he isn't successful in that sense and he's just making a living whilst doing what he knows he can do. I like to think of it more of the 'dark web' side of vore.
Posted by BlakeSmith15 4 years ago Report
fairly interesting. I look forward to any follows up that you may choose to do.
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
Thanks :)
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Honestly I think it would be more interesting if he didn't end up eating Sally, and ends up accidentally becoming a father figure to her , instead of her shitty snob of a father who got her mother and almost herself killed just because of his damned image. Plus the stuff he looted from Heather I'm sure would be more then enough to null and void the prey contract outside the fact he knew it was forced and therefore non-binding.
Posted by pizza3695 4 years ago Report
Wow, you put a lot of thought into that! :)
Posted by bellylov3rs 4 years ago Report
Heh why thank you :)