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Sarah hungers stir, forcing her to go hunting in a nearby park, read to find out how it went! But you can probably guess XD
Phew! Almost 6000 words in this one! I tried to put more details in it compared to my previous stories. I feel like i'm slowly improving!
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Posted by corruptedcroissant 4 years ago Report
This is best thing. It is best thing! You outdone yourself yet again !
Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report
Thank you once again!
I intend to improve more!
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
not gonna lie i like mary alot more than sarah . and its because of this story right here. She is actually acknowledging that sarah is a murderer. and that not everyone will be a bad person
Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report
I can understand that. I don't think i wanted a predator to be sympathetic for what she does, it's her nature to consume other people, every predator needs to cope with that. It also has something to do in being intoxicating, as some predator would say. Mary is having this conflict because she's afraid that she would became a mindless beast if she succeed in her little experiments. Sarah got over this a long time ago and if that happens, she will be there for her. She's a murder, but she is not heartless. If that makes sense for you XD.
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
no it makes perfect sense. my favorite type of preds are the ones who dont try to balance between good and evil either be completely evil or be a good person. mary acknowledging the fact the moral dilema means that she will be my favorite pred you make because she's not going to be a heartless murderer . but instead she will be a caring pred. sarah while she isnt evil , she isnt a caring pred either she treats people like food which means her conscience died a long time ago . which puts her in the middle.
this means that if sarah was to be eaten by another pred id be happy, where as with mary id be upset
Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report
I see your point. For me i prefer to be in the grey, because it makes a character more relatable, no one is pure evil or pure good, they are always a different shade of greys, some brighter, some darker. I don't want to say that Mary will be a caring pred, she does enjoy watching Sarah digest people after all. The question she ask is: is it going to be the same when she will do it? It's fine being an outsider of the whole vore business, but when she's going to do it would she see her vore fetish in a new light?
I still haven't decided that.
However she is a unique case, involving awakening her vore abilities way later than any normal predator have ever done, so who knows what she'll become.
Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report
An apex for sure.
Just about what I’m looking for in good Vore content
Posted by carlj 3 years ago Report
Indeed, she's a very hungry girl ^^
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
I'll be honest, Maria's diaries are always so much fun to read. They help bring other perspective to it, and it's fun to see her progress in the *fun* matters, too!
Great story, as always!
Posted by carlj 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! ^^
I plan to have Mary make progress sometimes in the future. Just need to wrap up some unfinished stories first.