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The school had offered coaching for teachers. Not for the aftermath, of course, but “the act itself” as they had so blithely phrased it. Lisa hadn’t needed it. She hated how naturally it all came to her, the ease with which her body accepted another very nearly its own size.
Hey, two disclaimers for this one. First, all characters featured in this story are 18+. Second, this one's a bit of a downer. If you're at a place in your life where you don't need something like that, maybe look elsewhere.
Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth for a month. I've been in something of a creative rut recently. Between life not leaving much time for writing, and stagnation whenever I finally do get the chance, I kind of worked myself into a funk. Consider this the literary equivalent of a pressure release valve. Hopefully things get better from here.
I also chose to go with a simple excerpt rather than a synopsis. Given just how short this thing is, any sort of teaser I could offer would practically be the whole story.
Short, but definitely not sweet, at just under 1.5k words.
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Posted by Belthasar 4 years ago Report
I don't typically like written vore, but I really liked this one.
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
Kinda messed up to say it under this story but great job!
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Well that’s depressing. Judging by how you wrote it I’m assuming it was intentional.
Teacher preds are a very iffy concept. If you make a setting where teachers are allowed to eat their students. You have to justify why the teachers are doing so. To add on you have to also take into account how everyone feels about it. Many writers will just gloss over how the students outside the prey feel about being digested. Or worse they’ll make people indiscriminately fine with watching their classmates die sometimes painful deaths. This leads to a setting where the characters don’t make sense.
That said you didn’t do that. You made it clear that the teacher wasn’t ok with it. Which other writers have done before. However they do stories where the teacher is corrupted into liking killing their students. You didn’t however . She remained horrified by what was forced upon her. And you even showed how she coped with her depression that came from it.
This is by far one of the best teacher pred stories on here. The teacher makes sense as to why they teach. They are aware of the cruelty inherent to this situation. The teacher isn’t a sadist or a psychopath who just likes killing students. She’s a normal person in a crappy situation. And the student isnt just simply accepting it , she Knows she has no escape and was screwed over. Not a situation where the student was just used to the constant deaths , or just didn’t care.
This was perfect.
Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report
Well, thank you for the kind words.
While I definitely didn't write this as a reaction to the common school vore settings you typically see on this site, I'm glad you appreciated the different take on the setting.
I'll admit, I've never really "liked" this story, not because it's depressing or bleak (which it definitely is), but rather because it was born from a place of anger and frustration. In retrospect, the main reason I uploaded it was to try and break my slump, and it failed spectacularly.
I've always been surprised at how relatively well this thing did. I just kinda assumed it was an overlap of the general popularity of school settings and a healthy dose of "depression tourism," but I'm both surprised and relieved to hear it serving as an admittedly grim breath of fresh air.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 years ago Report
Seconded, this provides a great example of a well thought out plot and cast. Written to be slightly more than smut. Excellently executed.