Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

DUDE YOU GOTTA KEEP IT GOING.. I LOVE THIS . also , does amana digest people or do they stay alive inside her forever

Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report

Glad you're enjoying it! I guess you'll just have to see...it's certainly more efficient for her not to digest, at least.

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report

My god, you have come up with such a cool character. Her shyness is so damn cute, and her actual self is pretty cool as well

Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I've always been a fan of contrasts like this, so it's nice to see other people enjoying them too.

Posted by YepMcNope 4 years ago Report

Aha, I love Amana so much. The contrast between her "inner" and "outer" voices is stark, but believable.
Honestly, every single one of your story ideas, I'd love to see continued. They're all so good, I can't decide what I'd like to see next, but... I'll be happy with whatever you decide on!

Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report

That's so nice to hear! I'm pretty proud of Amana, but I'm trying to space things out so that no stories I still have ideas for get neglected.

Posted by minasan 4 years ago Report

I find the avatar inside the stomach a really original and interesting idea. The nondigestion works quite well with it. Could have some interesting dynamics with passengers.

Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I've actually been a fan of this idea personally well before I figured I'd write anything. Now the challenge is expanding it to a series.

Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report

This could become a very wholesome series with the passengers rotating in and out of Amana. Also relationship dynamics and whatnot.

Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report

Hopefully! I can't say I have the future well-planned, but it's certainly in Amana's best interest to accrue "tenants"