The return of the king!
There's that storytelling and character writing I love to see.
I love the way you explore Amy's personality through Sarah, and I just love their dynamic in general. They're so cute together.
Everything, from the descriptive details to the overall structure, feels inspired and well-crafted. Once again, lovely work!
Walking through the esophagus? Something I've thought about a lot over the years, but this is the first time I've seen the prey actually just walk through the esophagus themselves as opposed to being swallowed/vomited.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Shes so precious, why would you ever want to leave her
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Well, the air circulation isn't the best. It's a bit warm in summer.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Details. Im sure she could get some ice in there somehow.
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
You know, I'm not the type of guy you'd see begging to get eaten, but god damn I really wouldn't mind staying there!
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
She'd be happy to have you!
Posted by YepMcNope 3 years ago Report
The return of the king!
There's that storytelling and character writing I love to see.
I love the way you explore Amy's personality through Sarah, and I just love their dynamic in general. They're so cute together.
Everything, from the descriptive details to the overall structure, feels inspired and well-crafted. Once again, lovely work!
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I do my best to keep everything organic, so to speak, so it's really nice to be appreciated.
Posted by rotta287 3 years ago Report
Walking through the esophagus? Something I've thought about a lot over the years, but this is the first time I've seen the prey actually just walk through the esophagus themselves as opposed to being swallowed/vomited.
Nice.
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Not many predators let that happen, so it makes sense! Thanks.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
This was beautiful! I love how sincere Amana is and the entire series felt very soft.
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much. Yeah, Amana's probably the gentlest type of character I've written (or at least Amy is), so she's very comfy.
Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 3 years ago Report
Finished this little trilogy.
Absolutely lovely and I love the contrast between Amana and Amy.
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm pretty proud of it.