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Amana is many things, and maybe a few more now, but she's not a liar.

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

Shes so precious, why would you ever want to leave her

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

Well, the air circulation isn't the best. It's a bit warm in summer.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

Details. Im sure she could get some ice in there somehow.

Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report

You know, I'm not the type of guy you'd see begging to get eaten, but god damn I really wouldn't mind staying there!

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

She'd be happy to have you!

YepMcNope

Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report

The return of the king!
There's that storytelling and character writing I love to see.
I love the way you explore Amy's personality through Sarah, and I just love their dynamic in general. They're so cute together.
Everything, from the descriptive details to the overall structure, feels inspired and well-crafted. Once again, lovely work!

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much! I do my best to keep everything organic, so to speak, so it's really nice to be appreciated.

rotta287

Posted by rotta287 2 years ago Report

Walking through the esophagus? Something I've thought about a lot over the years, but this is the first time I've seen the prey actually just walk through the esophagus themselves as opposed to being swallowed/vomited.

Nice.

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

Not many predators let that happen, so it makes sense! Thanks.

ClosetedTiny

Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report

This was beautiful! I love how sincere Amana is and the entire series felt very soft.

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much. Yeah, Amana's probably the gentlest type of character I've written (or at least Amy is), so she's very comfy.

AGuyWithBigHair

Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 2 years ago Report

Finished this little trilogy.
Absolutely lovely and I love the contrast between Amana and Amy.

Birichino

Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm pretty proud of it.