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Ending A, in which Kendra finishes the job...
That's a wrap folks, check out Ending B if this wasn't to your tastes!
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Posted by Camlio420 3 years ago Report
The formatting could use some work as theres empty space for yonks (years) at the end with no clear reason as to why on this one.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Yeah I wrote this on my phone in one sitting, I've gotta circle back for cleanup haha
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Great story , now I understand why you never had anyone fully digested in the earlier stories
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Early in the writing process I knew I wanted to see partial digestion + escape, but I also wanted to explore the WHOLE gang being digested. I figured this was the best way to handle it.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
It worked great , leaving a hint of escape at all times , makes it believable when they escape . As well as makes digestion understandable too
Posted by Uchihabiscuit 3 years ago Report
Really loved the series here, hope you will do more stuff with Kendra in the future and between the two endigs this one is my favorite.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Part of why I went both directions for endings was to easily free up the characters for future use!
Posted by Zerg 3 years ago Report
Great story. I'd love to see you do something with endo vore. Maybe a girl or two getting lost in the preds guts but kept alive as a bad ending.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Endo usually isn't my jam, but when combined with entrapment stuff it actually works pretty well for me. I've got some ideas along those lines hashed out for the future.
Posted by gva274 3 years ago Report
This is amaaazing! Great work!
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Uchihabiscuit 3 years ago Report
Posting here again after rereading, this is such a great sequence of story, the way you write the swallowing and the disposal at the end is perfect.
Also, it might just be me, but I would love to see a spin off where Kendra and Erin stay lovers as Erin goes on about feeding her huge girlfriend and Kendra learns to love being a big predator.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm proud of how it came out! I'd actually considered the idea of doing something super similar, but it would be a slow build to having Kendra be into it when sober. No hard plans yet for Kendra and the gang as far as new stories but I've got some ideas for down the line.
Posted by Uchihabiscuit 3 years ago Report
Ohh I'm would be very interested in seeing Erin slowly but surely making Kendra love getting her belly full, especially because it would mean more of her in bed to love!
I'm sure that whatever ideas you have for the gang will be as good of a read as this one!
Posted by Kelly 2 years ago Report
This was some of the hottest shit I have ever read
Posted by Ohgra 2 years ago Report
Glad to hear it! <3