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In which Marloweny writes a whole sequel to attempt to ease the unfortunate implications of another story.
First part here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/659665
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Posted by Leorouge 4 years ago Report
Ooooh, nice insights into the Toon mindset. Primary purpose is to entertain/be viewed and they can’t do that without an audience so no permanent damage allowed. On the other hand they have so much freedom to do whatever is necessary to maintain the audience’s enthralment. Up to and including getting rid of “distractions”.
Posted by ninth 4 years ago Report
LOL excellent, this "sequel" definitely brings some closure to the first part.
>“Hey!” Val gibbered in her toony language, stomping up to the other side of Tom’s head. “Less talkings! Too much thinkings and maybe bad thinkings. Very very sexings now!”
Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
Heh, was wondering if you were going to do a followup.
Glad to see they've still got some sapience knocking around in there somewhere, and mad props to Dr. Reed for the display of sheer willpower. Still feels like Val is stuck in a bit of wirehead droud without the agency to choose not to be entirely dependant on Tom, but as long as she's able to "work real hard to make with the talkings and the thinkings" then it seems to be a hopeful ending.
Posted by Tassie 4 years ago Report
The conversation was a little hard to follow, but for the sake of getting into the mind of a simple-brained predator (of sorts) and having it be a silly cartoon at the same time, it was very worth it.
Oh, I hate bedbugs, but even with horrible memories of those nasty little pests, this was still a very fun read.