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The Dragongirl Next Door By LivesInAStomach -- Report

“That's how I have fun. Every day, I get to wake up remembering the fact that I have a full human girl locked away inside of my stomach, the fact that she's not going to leave for another six more years, that she has to live every single day covered in absolutely disgusting slop, the same slop she has to eat if she doesn't want to starve to death—”

Glurguruglle...

Marie tried in vain to pull her head away, but Calypso just pushed her face into her stomach harder.


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My first submission here! So any feedback is greatly appreciated.

I wanted to do something a little different and slightly unique with this piece—I'm a huge fan of permanent/really really long endosoma, but I wanted to write a story where the vore had already taken place, and it's told from a spectator's perspective. It's a bit of a slow burn but hopefully it's enjoyable.

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x9comega

Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report

I ADORE how sadistic she is~

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

She definitely is a charmer. :) Thank you!

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report

And it’s not too villainously over the top either, it’s clearly just a girl who knows she’s a Dom, and taking that role to heart x3

Darian

Posted by Darian 4 years ago Report

Iiinteresting. Calypso was kinder to the princess than I thought she'd be when she was alone.

I'm not THAT big into sadistic preds, but you made this girl very fun to read about.

Are you planning on doing more with these characters and/or making others?

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

Yup, that's the plan. Marie will have a bunch of other girls to meet, and they'll all be recurring characters.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report

Sounds interesting, I can't wait.

UnknownEnforcer

Posted by UnknownEnforcer 4 years ago Report

Hello~ I just stumbled upon this, and I am wondering what other tags you like/love?

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report

Wow, that was a pretty good story.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

Thank you!

TeruyukiKiryuin

Posted by TeruyukiKiryuin 4 years ago Report

Pretty good, pretty good. I'm very interested in Calypso

threk

Posted by threk 4 years ago Report

Ooh, interesting... I'm into sadistic endo preds so seeing her hamming it up and then being kinder in private was a cool little twist.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

Oooh yes, but she wasn't exactly lying about how much she enjoys tormenting the poor princess. ;)

VoidStarz

Posted by VoidStarz 4 years ago Report

I love this kind of dynamic between predator and prey, the both cruel but caring relationship with such a heavy power dynamic, its great >///>

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

Very glad you enjoyed!~

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

Interesting story and I am curious to see how this develops, everybody so far seems to be a bit odd in one way or another XD

Combat

Posted by Combat 4 years ago Report

Love the concept and execution of this story. Well done.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

Thank you very much!

Undrgrnd831

Posted by Undrgrnd831 4 years ago Report

Well... I didn't know I had a thing for sadistic dragon girl press. But I do now.

rotta287

Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report

I don't usually consider sadistic endo much, endo is usually soft and cuddly.

But this is different, feels strange.

A sadistic pred.... But also very caring and with a very willing prey..... Such a strange balance.

I think I kinda like it.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

I'm glad to have offered you a different perspective ;) And I'm even more glad you enjoyed it.

Tysia

Posted by Tysia 4 years ago Report

Long-term endosoma with the reality of being trapped in a predator's body is woefully underdone around here, this is just an absolute treat. Fantastic work!

Calypso is a delight & I'm super looking forward to reading more about Marie meetin' other predators!

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report

I agree it's underdone! Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed.

TastesUndivided

Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report

This is so unique and such a prefect balance of what I like but didn't know I wanted~

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

Well then, I'm very glad you found it! Thank you for reading and commenting <3

EmilyNidhoggr

Posted by EmilyNidhoggr 3 years ago Report

Beatrice! Why is not thy succour lent
To she, who so much loved thee, as to leave
For thy sake all the multitude villages?

What a bomb-ass dragon though. Absolute power eater.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

Hehe, thank you. Calypso definitely has a loud personality, she's confident and she knows what she wants.

Artthegreat

Posted by Artthegreat 3 years ago Report

This is really fun, the one thing I don’t like is that the dragonis crushing Beatrice like that. It doesn’t paint a pretty picture for Beatrice’s bone structure, and the muscle atrophy. And at some point, gradual or not the compression would straight up kill her.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

You're absolutely right, but two things: 1) I think some suspension of disbelief is necessary for a vore story, and Calypso already has some form of magic, so Beatrice is probably fine. And, 2) Calypso is already a bit of an unreliable narrator... there's no way of telling how much she's saying is actually the truth, or how much is just her trying to scare Marie. I'm going to be exploring this in future installments (which are coming!)

Artthegreat

Posted by Artthegreat 3 years ago Report

Yeah, good points. Magic could potentially be keeping Beatrice unharmed by the crushing in several ways. I didn’t notice any lies to make Calypso unreliable, but my hope is that, at a certain point of crushing she secretly slowly loosens the corset because even if magic keeps Beatrice unharmed from the crushing I imagine having some of a bump is useful to her teasing efforts. Not to mention that I think at least a small amount of hammer-space or shrinking is probably needed to reach that much size reduction even with the crushing, based on the drawings. (Yes suspension of disbelief, I just have fun over-analyzing the things I enjoy.)

I would love to get a detailed story about Calypso when she first swallowed Beatrice and had a huge belly getting in her way, assuming that was true.

Artthegreat

Posted by Artthegreat 3 years ago Report

Oh I almost forgot, Thank you for the amazing story! I eagerly await whatever you write next.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

Thank you for reading and commenting! It's always nice to hear from a reader.

Don't wanna reveal too much, but I do plan on writing a story about Calypso and Beatrice's first encounter... eventually.

AGuyWithBigHair

Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 3 years ago Report

Okay, I was lead here by your recent willudie commission... and I absolutely ADORED this story!

From the top to the interactions to the 'surprise' ending. I can tell I am just gonna have to read to the backlog.

Instant watch :)

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you managed to find your way here. I've occasionally kept tabs on your own little series too, even though I'm not a fan of cock vore--there just isn't enough of this kinda stuff on Eka's. Hope you enjoy your stay! <3

AGuyWithBigHair

Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 3 years ago Report

Oh gosh, that makes me feel happy and a bit nervous honestly.

Literally just binged most of your Voretober stories (if a certain wave of fave notifications didn't give it away) and making me think a bit about the quality of my own stuff... but I guess that just means I got to work a bit harder at it heh.

Like you said, eka's just didn't seem to have enough of this kind of content, so I will keep tryin to throw my hat into the ring while also looking out for new stuff from you!

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report

Yes, I saw that wave of faves, and it certainly made me giddy! Thank you so much, I'm glad you like so much of my stuff.

And try not to let your brain bully you too much. It's not a competition or anything--writers have to stick together, right? Just keep at it, you already seem to be doing great things.