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Kiss Me On My Open Mouth By Belloc -- Report

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Skyler's new job at the library has been going well, and for the first time he's been asked to lock the place up at closing time. The only thing peculiar is the strange, silent woman with loud headphones on who has been following him around all day. It would not normally bother him... until he hears her music playing after the library has already been emptied and locked.

A quickie, with a lot of focus on the build up and chase. Inspired by a desire to openly reference a lot of songs I like.

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Randomness

Posted by Randomness 7 months ago Report

I'm a simple person. I see you upload something, I favorite it.

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Story machine go clickclack!

Seriously though, thanks!

heromc

Posted by heromc 7 months ago Report

Seriously amazing buildup!!!

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Thanks a ton, hero!

saintheartwing

Posted by saintheartwing 7 months ago Report

Nice job! And good foreshadowing...

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

HipHugger

Posted by HipHugger 7 months ago Report

As if I wouldn't hit the favorite button on this one!

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Thanks Hip!

nerdelation8

Posted by nerdelation8 7 months ago Report

This was awesome and very suspenseful!

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Thank you!

VaguenessIncoming

Posted by VaguenessIncoming 7 months ago Report

Chef's kiss!

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Or for him, the kiss of death!

Ryujin

Posted by Ryujin 7 months ago Report

I've said it before and I'll say it again. This is a fantastic piece and you're a master of atmospheric horror. This was outstanding and I can't click the favorite button hard enough. :)

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Really appreciate the kind words, Ryu! Thanks!

lyingunderfire

Posted by lyingunderfire 7 months ago Report

Man... I really need to catch up with your writings.

~Your level of suspense is damn near unmatched, we swear.~

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 7 months ago Report

Thanks! I try!

lyingunderfire

Posted by lyingunderfire 7 months ago Report

And I'll be sure to try and find the time to read what I've missed this last year!

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 6 months ago Report

I love this pred. I’ve been thinking about her all day. I want to write one just like her. Tell me everything about her so I can learn. She says nothing. Like some carnal force or ancient monster brought to life to hunt librarians

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 6 months ago Report

That's part of the allure! She keeps her secrets. xD Just a hunting force. I'm glad you enjoy her so much!

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 6 months ago Report

Urghhhh I wanna know more. You better write another one with her soon :)