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Skyler's new job at the library has been going well, and for the first time he's been asked to lock the place up at closing time. The only thing peculiar is the strange, silent woman with loud headphones on who has been following him around all day. It would not normally bother him... until he hears her music playing after the library has already been emptied and locked.
A quickie, with a lot of focus on the build up and chase. Inspired by a desire to openly reference a lot of songs I like.
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Posted by Randomness 4 years ago Report
I'm a simple person. I see you upload something, I favorite it.
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Story machine go clickclack!
Seriously though, thanks!
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Seriously amazing buildup!!!
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thanks a ton, hero!
Posted by saintheartwing 4 years ago Report
Nice job! And good foreshadowing...
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by HipHugger 4 years ago Report
As if I wouldn't hit the favorite button on this one!
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thanks Hip!
Posted by nerdelation8 4 years ago Report
This was awesome and very suspenseful!
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 4 years ago Report
Chef's kiss!
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Or for him, the kiss of death!
Posted by Ryujin 4 years ago Report
I've said it before and I'll say it again. This is a fantastic piece and you're a master of atmospheric horror. This was outstanding and I can't click the favorite button hard enough. :)
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Really appreciate the kind words, Ryu! Thanks!
Posted by lyingunderfire 4 years ago Report
Man... I really need to catch up with your writings.
~Your level of suspense is damn near unmatched, we swear.~
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I try!
Posted by lyingunderfire 4 years ago Report
And I'll be sure to try and find the time to read what I've missed this last year!
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
That's part of the allure! She keeps her secrets. xD Just a hunting force. I'm glad you enjoy her so much!