Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

I am in no way surprised that Xenos left out no erotic details when telling a story to Ayla, but I was surprised by the ending revealing his story may not actually be true. Also it's nice to see Xenos and Elizabeth get along so well.

Between dragons and lizards, it doesn't seem like Lacy Lingerie Ladies keeps employees for very long.

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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

Hehe, Xenos is very passionate with women and isn't shy of showing it off ; )

I had to twist the end in order to make Xenos more sympathetic towards Elizabeth than he was in the main text. Xenos may not have told Ayla the whole truth, but if you want to know, it is an amalgam of what Xenos told:

The first part with the Lacy Lingerie Ladies was where he ate so many women that he couldn't fly, but Elizabeth was yet not employed there.
Thereafter, he walked into the forest where he met Elizabeth, but was unable eat her (Xenos and Elizabeth's conversation was true on that part).
The third meeting was a chance encounter at the beach as told in the story, though he would have been less eager to eat her than what he told Ayla.
On their forth encounter, he wouldn't have missed that Elizabeth had a baby since it would have started to cry from all the ruckus they made before he tried to eat her!
So what he told Ayla on this part would be partly true.

I am going to explore their relationship after this in another story.

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Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Ha! This was a fabulous blend of humor and plenty of sexy voreness . . . both the result of Xenos's relentless misbehaviors, of course. xD

All the interaction and banter was really fun, especially between Xenos and Elizabeth. Loved the hilarious bit where you pointed out that all the erotic detail was being narrated to poor Ayla, too.

Also makes sense that Xenos might edit some (at lot of) the details of the story . . . but definitely not leave out the explicit sexy bits. xD

Great stuff!

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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

Thanks a lot, I am glad to hear you found the story, and which part of it, amusing : )
Xenos isn't especially shy of telling his daughter about some of the most important aspects of vore (in his view), his daughter is half-a-dragon, so he tells her just to be sure in case she inherits some of his behavior/taste... XD

I will write two more stories, and the next part will explore the relationship between Xenos and Elizabeth. I will leave that part uncensored too ; )

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Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report

I love this such a good read

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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

Thanks a lot :D

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