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A commissioned story, Tyler moves into a new apartment and his sisters come over to help him with a housewarming party. But Tyler's new neighbor takes a very keen interesting in him and his family.
Commissioned by elliotalien08
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Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Well that was interesting... seems they’ll get a loving family this time though
Posted by TW 4 years ago Report
Well done. Enjoyable and quick paced. Not too much build up. Although the ages seemed odd, if Tyler is 18, were all the kids within like 2 years of each other?
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
Fun!
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
Honestly, looking at this premise almost want's me to imagine writing, if not reading a hypothetical alternative ending if we're either speaking full age regression. Or if going on a more "NTR" end, Tyler forced to witness that rapid age regression happen to his sisters, in front of him. With a possible prospect of them not 'getting' out.
Bar that. The only other hindsight I can think of, is not enough love for stretchmarks, with having up to four people, inside her womb. That aside, I'm guessing they've unbirthed and rebirthed enough people as to have been functionally 'immortal' in family antics.