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CW: This story contains quasi-incest between siblings (No actual direct contact takes place, but siblings get strange thoughts about each other and some activity happens in proximity).
Commission for David
Originally completed in February, this was meant to be a salable commission, but I kept having a little trouble on exactly how to quantify it on sale sites. So I finally decided to just go ahead and post it up free to read for those that will enjoy it.
When Sean agrees to let his sister move in with him as soon as she graduates high school, it feels perfectly normal. But after she sees the giant old catfish that lives in the pond outside his home, something strange starts to overtake both of them. Something that seems to awaken odd, forbidden desires in both siblings.
Posted by JackJackal 3 years ago Report
love it!
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
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Posted by trynn2020 3 years ago Report
This was damn hot
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Thank you, happy you enjoyed this one. :)
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Posted by GGO 3 years ago Report
Excellent story!
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
I appreciate that! Always nice to get these!
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Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
omg this made me so horny DX
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Hee, hee, always happy to hear about that reaction. ;)
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Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
As usal sir your writing is very good. and now i'm hungry to be in a tummy >///<
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Posted by Plgc 3 years ago Report
Holy cow.
What a story.
WOWZERS
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Very belated, as I apparently missed some comments on this one. Thanks so much, glad it pushed the right buttons!
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Posted by FuzzyBlue 3 years ago Report
This is an amazing story! The ending hints at a part two?? Thanks for sharing :)
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Don't know that it will ever be a part 2, but I also never rule that out necessarily. ;) Glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted by kirche 3 years ago Report
This story is amazing. Probably my favorite one since "Feeding the young."
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Really happy to hear that! Thanks for the double compliment (also happy to know you liked "Feeding the Young" that much. :) ).
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Posted by KumoKakera94 3 years ago Report
I would love to read this from her perspective. Love the story all around
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I may consider at some point writing a fish story from a female prey's perspective to see how that works out.
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Posted by rugersniper 3 years ago Report
Any chance. You would take commission (don't know how that works) to expand or alternate ending this? Love it so much id like more
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliment! I'll send you a PM on this soon to let you know what might be possible as far as commissions go.
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Posted by gtgod 2 years ago Report
Great story!
What a wonderful pred!
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Posted by gtgod 2 years ago Report
Love the gentle sexual swallowing
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Posted by the_Wolf 1 year ago Report
Thanks, nice to know you liked that style and pred. I did have fun writing that mood, I'll need to get back to more stuff like this soon. :)
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