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A story where Nalzindar's chronically misbehaving dragon Xenos intrudes upon a bevy of sexy slumber party girls. Can you guess how it might play out?
This was a very fun story, written partly to thank the fantastic Nalzindar's for doing so many gorgeous illustrations of my stories! Hopefully I didn't misrepresent his characters too badly here. And if you like my work, you should absolutely give him a browse, if you haven't already.
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report
Really good story! Nothing I can think of beats a good dragon predator! *sounds of tentacles wiggling in the background* Nope, can't think of anything better than a dragon!
It's so cool to see someone's original characters interpreted and written by someone else!
I will say from my own experiences dealing with Nalzindar, I don't find Xenos to be so evasive or trying to hide his actions from Ayla.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Dragons (and tentacles!) are most certainly among the best type of predators. Giantess is good too . . . and you cane dragon-giantess, or even tentacle-giantess if you want! xD
Yeah, I was most unsure about Xenos and Ayla's interaction, but Nalzindar said it was fine, and honestly: I just found that angle the most amusing. x3
Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report
Thank you for writing this wonderful story for me, you have done a fantastic job, as always :D
The way you have portrayed Xenos and Ayla is absolutely in character and I have nothing else than praise for your work.
It gave me a good laugh when Xenos turned out to be more worried about the nice car than its unfortunate driver, that is exactly how he behave/speaks, and the following scene was damn sexy and really funny when it came to the windows XD
Seeing the other girls being scooped up, stripped and swallowed was also a fun way to conclude the slumber party. I especially enjoyed how Xenos got the goth girl, nice :P
Seeing Ayla in the last scene was just as fun, I guess she already has a good feeling of she won't find when she searches through the house, at least she can indulge in ice cream^^
Once again, thank you, it is always such a thrill to read your stories : )
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! It was great to work on, and Xenos & Ayla were both very fun to write!
It seemed only fair: if Xenos got to indulge in slumber-party-girl, Ayla should get to indulge in some ice cream, at least. xD
Anyway, it was a fantastically fun opportunity to 'borrow' your characters for a bit here, so really no thanks necessary! :D
Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report
I think I always enjoy how you depict these wonderful ladies in the stomach.
Maybe they can look on the bright side, at least their with good company~
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
I do love a good internal sequence . . . especially a crowded one, so I'm glad you liked the emphasis on that aspect!
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Really nice work! What wonderful internal descriptions, the light comedy...just really well done.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
I do like to mix vore and comedy a bit, as well as those extended internal bits, so I'm happy those came off well!
Posted by longwayofftiff 3 years ago Report
Your stomach scenes never fail to disappoint! I’d like to think a dragon would enjoy swallowing my body. Nicely orchestrated voredom from the Lord of Girl Gulping!
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I have grown quite fond of those (crowded) internal scenes, so I'm happy you approve!
I'm certain any dragon worth their salt wouldn't be able to resist gobbling you up!
Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report
The ending was hilarious, I highly approve. Also, the "yank the rug out from under her" was very clever ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad that final ending bit was amusing, since I really wanted to capture the delightfully funny family dynamic between Xenos and Ayla.
Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report
That was fun! I just hope there are enough girls left uneaten for Ayla to enjoy the party. :D
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! It was fun to work on, I gotta say, and silly vore seems to be the antidote to melancholy for me. xD
Yeah, and on the bright side, fewer girls means more total ice cream per survivor! xD
Posted by DragonLover66 3 years ago Report
Fantastically amazingly good story. I loved this story it was very good and I loved the internal stomach scenes. I definitely want to see a sequel to this in the future if possible. In the sequel it would be great if some implied digestion was able to be included in it.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thank you! :D
Another story with Xenos is certainly possible, since this was quite a fun project to work on!