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Michael is going on a double date with one of his biggest crushes. There are three problems with this.
A. His jerk of an older brother Joe is the other guy on the double date.
B. His brother's date is Juri Han another woman he has a crush on and a well known pred with a huge appetite and bigger tits
C. His date and crush Azula also a well known pred with even larger boobs
Michael hasn't heard of a guy surviving a date with either of them before. Will he be the first or just another ounce of bounce for one of the women?
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Posted by ErRynArya 3 years ago Report
"Another ounce of bounce" made me chortle like a gremlin lol
Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 years ago Report
Coming up with these lines is one of my favorite parts of this whole gig.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Your pun game is second to none. Also why did juri remind me of hitomi tanaka
Posted by Skullhammer123 3 years ago Report
My lord, that was just fantastic. Not gonna lie, one of the best i've read on here. Keep up the great work!
Posted by ErRynArya 3 years ago Report
Honestly, the whole idea of collaring the pred's is both hot as fuck and extremely interesting. I might need to look into this concept in the future one day.
Was it your idea or Hive's? Either way it's a genius one
Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 years ago Report
Mostly Hivelord's idea. To have them wear collars as a sign of being tied to someone who has some amount of respect/control/affection.
I only extrapolated on it a bit to explore concepts of the the "owner" deciding when their pred could feed and then further exploring levels of collaring. Does it lock? With a key? Or a Combination so the pred really can't get it off even through force? What if it's welded shut? That would make for quite a power exchange. There was more beneath the surface when I paused to consider it. Initially I considered it an afterthought but it made for a thought provoking layer of power exchange in the oral vore realm.
Posted by ZeroxZygatto 3 years ago Report
Aw, that was actually super sweet, and i loved the ending!
Posted by Dickevin 3 years ago Report
This story IS very original. It's really rare to see romance where the date doesn't end in a black Window style, where true romance and feeling have meaning. It's make it really sweet to watch how the relationship between the couple grow until the end, where the 3 of them are together and happy.
And the collar Idea was genius from Hivelord, make the relationship look much more deeper. In the relationship, one of the lovers must impress enough the others partie so she IS willing to accept him. She then accept to Wear the collar to show devotion and trust in each of the partners, showing that each of them have influence on the others.
In bonus, this story IS really hot. I was greatly excited, in body and spirit, the first Time I have read it.
Little questions : Will you make a follow UP on this story ? Something with the 3 of them latter in their lire ?
Have a nice day and good Luck ;)
Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 years ago Report
Not likely I think. I wouldn't do more with the characters unless someone commissioned me to do so.
I can't say the concepts might not come back some day. The setting is of interest to me with the whole collaring thing. So might see that again someday.