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Tags: Belly Big Belly Child Prey Cruel Pred Dash parr Digestion Disney F/F F/M f/multiple Female Pred greedy pred headband Helen Parr hiding belly Huge belly immobile immobile pred Incredibles Incredibles 2 Lying lying on belly Multiple Preys Oral Oral Vore Same Size scared prey Siblings Sister/Brother Student student pred Stuffing Violet Violet Parr written work
Wow, it's been four months since I last uploaded. To update people, I've been going through some changes in my personal life. Nothing to worry about, it's all good stuff, but it's taken a lot of time. I saw SirEdwardthe3rd's awesome gif of Violet and saw it as an oppertunity to get back to uploading something I enjoy! You can find it here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/725893
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Posted by SirEdwardthe3rd 3 years ago Report
Thanks again, man! I appreciate it!
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
No worries, always love writing stories for you great art. This was was particularly fun as some of the details on her desk in your art inspired the story! I forgot to link it but I’ll do that now.
Posted by LaliaCooch 3 years ago Report
Great story and great to see you back!
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
Thanks, good to be back. Let’s see if I can keep my uploads consistent this time xD
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
I hope this gets a sequel where dash escapes or gets saved and takes revenge lol
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
I’m personally only into vore that ends in digestion but you could feel free to write it yourself if you want. I hope you enjoyed the story nonetheless?
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
great story, though violet seemed out of character. but it makes sense in a twisted vore way
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
Yeah, that's often the trouble with vore stories where the pred is a good person. I like my preds to be kinda cruel and careless with their prey but it leans into the issue of them feeling out of character.
Posted by Assimilation 3 years ago Report
I don't think it's a huge deal if you tweak their personalities for a short vore fanfic. If you're writing a few more pages' worth, then the story featuring some rationale for the personality shift can be warranted.
I personally like "good/neutral people turning bad" as its own trope even outside of vore contexts, so I get a double-win when it's a story that includes the predator witnessing something embittering (like a bully picking on someone) or experiencing an overwhelming pull (perhaps the pred is suffering because they can't stomach normal food anymore, but nearby person smells delicious) that makes them okay with eating just this one time... which snowballs into one more time... and so on.
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I do definitely agreed that it’s not a huge deal, the real issue is just figuring out how much to tweak the personalities.
Yeah, that’s a great trope. I have a series I’m working on, MCU Zombies, which will show the predators’ gradually give in to their hunger for different reasons. It’s hopefully gonna allow the characters to progress in a completely different direction to their MCU counterparts.
Thanks so much for all the feedback, I love having discussions like this, feel free to continue it with any more thoughts or ideas you have!
Posted by bronzelara 3 years ago Report
Hot story and wouldnt be surprised if Helen had got her curves in a similar way. Wonder if she will figure out what happened when the others dont return
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
I think she probably did, yeah. As for what happens after, I’ll leave that up to your imagination : )
Posted by Assimilation 3 years ago Report
Great job. I'm impressed how much you got across in such a short length.
Posted by ArrowversePreds 3 years ago Report
Thanks so much, I’m really glad you enjoyed it as I put a lot of thought into the structure :)