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And finally, we are at the end. Kibate did an amazing job turning my story into a comic, with such lovely artwork all the way through.
I know some would have liked to see this end in a different way, but that's not what this story is. There's plenty of art and stories around that take a different direction; the majority in fact do, which is why I got into story writing in the first place, to create material with themes I liked.
Go and checkout Kibate's Patreon, he's done plenty of other work and will (I assume!) be doing plenty more.
https://www.patreon.com/deviantkibate/
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Posted by DejiruHerald 3 years ago Report
I sincerely enjoyed this from beginning to end, very great, very wholesome and sexy, really well made, certainly a success <3
Posted by Appo 3 years ago Report
It's a great comic. It's somehow just as enjoyable in a different way to be titillated by a story that almost went another way but didn't. Both of your characters will always live with the memory of what almost happened, and thoughts of what the other was really thinking. What a great situation.
Posted by IJustLurkOnD 3 years ago Report
Man, I so wish there was a digestion version. But hey, can't complain, this was great all the way through.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
awesome ending
Posted by von-de-rush 3 years ago Report
48 pages of greateness!
Posted by edem63 3 years ago Report
Hi, I really like this comic. You could try writing a story that starts between panels 43-45. but Rachel wouldn't have time to save Edward, he'd get into her guts. You could just write the story and maybe draw the panels once. the emotions are well drawn in this comic. it's a shame not to try that story line?
Posted by edem63 3 years ago Report
it's a shame there are no panels from the stomach journey but when rachel swallowed edward you drew a lot of panels. maybe you could draw these panels? You can see the loss of panels from page 41. I think it would have been a better ending if she had digested him because there would have been more emotion in the comic.
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
Hi, I’m glad you enjoyed the comic.
With all due respect, you are wrong. It’s not a shame the story didn’t cater to what you specifically wanted, and it wouldn’t have been better. The story and content catered to what I wanted and what many others wanted.
There are no panels missing. This is very much completed and correct. There will not be any extra work done to cater to you whims. A vast amount of time and effort went into creating what is here already.
I appreciate you would have liked a different story, but telling me that my story is somehow wrong because of this is kinda insulting. There’s a vast vast amount of fatal and digestion stuff on the gallery, I’m sure you can find something more to your taste.
Posted by Shannonrai 3 years ago Report
I’m really sorry that you get comments like that one. While I would have preferred digestion, clearly you poured a lot of time and effort into this and I respect your decisions and greatly enjoyed the comic regardless.
Posted by LaryBBQ 3 years ago Report
ooownt
Posted by LaryBBQ 3 years ago Report
ooownt
Posted by Jacquelope 1 year ago Report
That face when she realizes she could have digested him but didn't, by the hair of her chinny chin chin. She will likely have many nightmares...