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Concept, story, and characters: Kattu/PaoGordo.
Writing: EvilFuzzy9
Art done by the awesome ICUdhara.
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This week we will take a small glimpse on Gabi’s past, when she worked as a babysitter. What kind of shenanigans will she face off?

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https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1607536/Gabi-v-Jill3A-Vore-of-Justice---Issue-02
https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1530885/Gabi-and-Lily---Blind-date
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doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

and just like that another family dies because gabi cant handle embarrassment.. such is the cruelty of life. XD

you know if gabi's mom was a good mother she would teach her daughter how to deal with embarrassment in a healthy way rather than killing everyone within eyesight range.

i like how this story doesn't read as a horror story like most gabi stories. though it does try to make the reader sympathetic for her... but it doesn't really work. kinda just makes her seem more uncaring. although it does make lily even more lovable. she tries understand gabi's murderous ways but doesn't justify them and wants her to be better. this does make me wonder what changed in lily since in her other stories shes more accepting of gabi and company. its like she went from wanting gabi to stop , to only caring if gabi makes a big scene . I'm guessing that watching that many people die around gabi all the time desensitized her. '

anyways, forgive me for the long comment I'm working on my review skills.

ThiccerThanASniccer

Posted by ThiccerThanASniccer 3 years ago Report

Soviet russia doesn't agree.

ArchLinux

Posted by ArchLinux 3 years ago Report

yes bro, i know this is a vore stories well written too but i getting kinda tired of gabi allways doing mass vore and never got consecuenses getting kinda bored right know

ArchLinux

Posted by ArchLinux 3 years ago Report

well more consecueses tan a bigger chest

ElyBlanche

Posted by ElyBlanche 3 years ago Report

Consequences?

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

most people who read these stories genuinely want gabi to be caught or maybe just punched really hard by an angry victim. just a simple sign that she doesn't get away with mass murder. ironically on the opposite side , no one wants jill to be caught. i guess its mostly due to her accepting that shes a murderer.

ElyBlanche

Posted by ElyBlanche 3 years ago Report

Nono I understood that. Just the spelling was questionable and I wanted confirmation of the word they were saying lol.

necidime

Posted by necidime 3 years ago Report

It's better a true evilness than a fake goodness. Kattu's other characters mainly have their own morals (although twisted) and stick to them.
I personally like Gabi's sister the most. I think that the fate of anyone it kinda depends on if she think that they are more useful to her dead or alive.

ElyBlanche

Posted by ElyBlanche 3 years ago Report

I think you hit it on the head. It was a bit unfortunate that a lot of these stories sorta end the same, but this was a nice change of pace.

Good work on that Evilfuzzy guy also.

kattu

Posted by kattu 3 years ago Report

I don't get it... what people truly want? To Gabi to get caught, sentenced to death and die? I like good character and world building, but I also like my vore delivered in a very sexy way. So what's the point of bringing realism if that's not what most people are looking around here? I really don't understand this much complain on my recent stories.

UB10Guardian

Posted by UB10Guardian 3 years ago Report

Murdering innocent children isn’t sexy

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 3 years ago Report

Bud, murdering innocents is the hottest shit ever.

UB10Guardian

Posted by UB10Guardian 3 years ago Report

Wow I can’t even begin to imagine what your life must be like

Ananta

Posted by Ananta 3 years ago Report

This post is sponsored by the Sowaka Sowaka group.

necidime

Posted by necidime 3 years ago Report

I don't think you should particularly care of what people want.
When it is not a commission but is an artist's personal work, the best thing, in my opinion, is that the artist stay true to their original vision. When the artist change a work to accomodate the public, generally the result is poor.
Besides, even if comments are an important feedback, they are not truly representative of the opinion of the majority of the public.

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 3 years ago Report

I haven't started this story yet, but I scrolled to the comments right now since I saw people making these similar comments on the teaser pics from the past few days.

No specific comment, including my own, is going to give you an accurate idea of what most people here want—the commenter only knows their own preferences, and just because someone's willing to comment doesn't mean they represent the average viewer.

You should know you're doing something right because, regardless of the feedback itself, your content gets plenty of views and engagement.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

For the record I did not intend to inspire this much discourse . I just gave a review on your story . And printed out what Worked for me and didnt work.

Personally I just want gabi to face some justice. Not die . Although seeing her get eaten by the significant other of one of her victims would be cool though.

I love world building too , but at the same time since there’s world building the fact that gabi has been caught is a plot hole. Which I suspect is part of the issue. Since her stories usually involve her killing at least one or two families . Add on the fact that she eats the young children too , and it paints a picture that she would be at the top of most police searches. Since you’ve shown you like developing a world . It makes us question everything .

That’s kinda the dilemma with world building. The moment you show the tiniest hint of world building. Every detail becomes important. To your fans , leaving a major plot hole unresolved is confusing.

It’s also not even that we hate your characters or hate gabi, it’s like, her justification for killing people makes us want to see her get caught. And what’s weird is we don’t want Jill getting caught nor Samantha . It’s just gabi. I don’t know why cause we all like her. But we all at the same time want her caught and punished.

I think the isssue here isn’t realism but rather her justifications for that many casualties as well as the plot hole of the government not noticing this many people vanishing . Like if my guess is correct. Gabi likely had eaten by the time she goes to university , enough people to fill town. In fact I did the math , if we limit gabi to 1 person a month ( excluding freak outs ) , that means around 182 people go missing by the time she goes to university. If we change it to 1 per week ; the number changes to 832, again excluding freak outs. That’s the size of a town

Anyways hopefully this helps to explain the frustration of some people. And I’m sorry if this makes it worse

ReyCaron

Posted by ReyCaron 3 years ago Report

I guess I understand where you’re coming from now. I guess I didn’t anticipate or consider the plot hole parts that go hand in hand with world dev, so I apologize on my part for missing that and any antagonization I may have caused as well. Character dev is just as important as world building, as I overlooked, so I guess it makes sense that there should be action on the government in the Gabiverse to find these missing people, or find out what’s making them all go missing, (maybe some missing/wanted posters plastered all over town during the comics), but to my perception at the time, it seemed as though that people were making demands of the creator rather than making legitimate critiques. But I guess that’s perception for you, often times what we see in our eyes may be viewed differently in another persons way, which gives way to misinterpretation, and eventually an argument/fight. One of the reasons I like Gabi so much is that she’s emblematic of my own conflict of interest when it comes to the Vore fetish. Sometimes I enjoy myself with it, then other times I think how fucked in the head I became to get into it. Yet in the end, I always return for more. It’s that same kinda cycle for the Gabi character, in that she finds herself in a perpetual loop of eating entire families, feeling remorse and saying shit like she had no choice or that they didn’t deserve it, yet in the end she keeps on doing it. It’s that touch of inner conflict for her character that I like so much, but I do understand wanting to see some different approach’s to her character going forward. Repetition can get boring after a while, and I think it’s perfectly fine to desire something different. I think at the end of the day though, it’s the creators choice to decide where to steer their characters and the stories they tell themselves. We as “consumers” of the content thereof can simply offer different perspectives, tastes, ideas, critiques, or even new directions. Even I’ll admit I’d like to see Gabi at the very least confront her inner conflict at some point and acknowledge that she’s a killer and she likes being one. But for me, for now, I’ll enjoy the content I have, and enjoy my really weird fantasies.

ReyCaron

Posted by ReyCaron 3 years ago Report

As much as I do agree that at some point, Gabi should come to terms with what she does and that she likes it, and make peace with her devilish side, people do remember that the whole point of the Gabi character is to be different from every other kind of pred on this site, right? The whole point of Gabi is that she’s a confused woman who is torn between what she knows is wrong vs. what she enjoys a lot, who gets constantly embarrassed in a shit ton of situations, and hates people that want her just for her body without trying to really get to know her. It’s supposed to be a different dynamic, a different approach to writing a pred in general. While I do think her character should evolve at some point to be at peace with herself like Jill is, it’s important to remember that this is Kattu’s character, and Gabi will change or evolve or face some kind of consequences when they decide it’s time. Like seriously, the reason Gabi doesn’t get scolded by her mom in the first place so much is because her mother shares the exact same abilities, so it’s not like she knows how to be “mother of the year” when she’s probably committed just as much murder as Gabi has. She simply made peace with her side of her abilities, and she’s probably letting Gabi have her room to figure out what she wants more. On one side, you have her mother, a person that swore it all off to have a family and a life beyond eating people. Then on the other side, you’ve got Jill and Jenny, who’ve made peace with the devil in them and don’t excuse their hunger or what they love. Gabi is simply at the nexus point of deciding which path she’ll take in the end. In short, her character is still growing. Give it time, it may happen at some point.

UB10Guardian

Posted by UB10Guardian 3 years ago Report

It’s just the same mess over and over again
Eating innocents and getting away with it nothing new

TheWitness

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

with all due respect this is vore my friend a fetish in which it is about eating people whether they are men, women or children without exception, this is like rule 34: either you love it or you hate it

ReyCaron

Posted by ReyCaron 3 years ago Report

That’s kinda around the point I’m making, you either like Vore or you hate it. I’ve been on Rule 34 and there can be quite a few “characters” that can be brutal when it comes to this fetish, even though they go on a site where the literal rule is “If it can be imagined, there’s porn for it.” My understanding of Eka’s Portal is that its a site where people can express their interest in this weird ass fetish in a way that they enjoy, in whatever variety or capacity they find best suits them. I like the Gabi character because it shares a little bit of my own personal morals on the fetish itself, and how I felt when I get into it, and yet in the end I concluded that I enjoy it very much. So long as it stays a fantasy and no one goes outta their way to actually eat someone whole in real life, then I’m chill with whatever. Though I should mention that someone wanting a character like Gabi to be captured or murdered could just be a part of the Vore fetish for them as well. All I’m saying is, when it comes to the path of the character, that’s the creators choice, but if we want something specific ourselves, we can always ask if commissions are possible or not. I’ve always wanted more giantess versions of Kattu’s characters, Gabi and Jill especially, but I ain’t got the stones to ask. Sometimes the same pie can be boring, everyone has their own tastes, but I still appreciate the effort, work, and development of the pie in the end.

UB10Guardian

Posted by UB10Guardian 3 years ago Report

Did you not read my comment it’s not about it being a vore story it’s that this exact same plot and result has been done over and over again

ReyCaron

Posted by ReyCaron 3 years ago Report

And did you not read my comment of if you want something genuinely different, you can just ask? I know it’s the exact same content, I literally said it’s perfectly fine to want something different, but don’t complain and just tell the creator what to do with their characters. Maybe ask them if they intend to change it up at some point, or add some new dynamics. Plus, what did you expect? it’s a 15 year old version of Gabi, it’s not like she’s gonna be different compared to her current timeline self. Kattu is allowed to reuse their favourite approach’s to their characters as much as they see fit, it’s their characters, and when they want to change things up or add some development, then they will. If you want something different, just ask them if they’re willing to do a commission for something different, or even better, if you’ve got the patience and time, ask for permission to use their characters and write a fan fiction that you’ll like. If you want something different, just ask nicely, it’s not that hard. Also, do you really want characters that you obviously like to some degree to die or get caught? I wouldn’t mind getting to see Gabi get scolded by her mother, but to want to see her die or get caught and exposed by the whole world in a story about her past-tense fictional self is setting some unrealistic expectations of a character that you want dead, as that would mean canonical wise, we wouldn’t get any more comics or stories on her, period.

Tl:dr just ask for something different, it’s not that hard, and at the end of the day, it’s Kattu’s characters, they will do what they feel is best, pleasure and development wise.

UB10Guardian

Posted by UB10Guardian 3 years ago Report

Tbh Kattu is essentially a Dead Dove: Do Not Eat page
It tells you what it is
I immediately regret looking at it
And then I ask myself what was I expecting

kattu

Posted by kattu 3 years ago Report

One thing that people forget is that I try to upload content frequently, so they can't expect to be blown away with new things every month. I have some interesting, different things prepared for the future, but in the meantime I upload some regular, everyday stories. It's like having dinner: do you got out everyday to a different restaurant and ask for the most expensive dish all the time? No, you eat basically the same thing over and over because you like it, it's reliable and it's familiar and you like it. And when you do taste something different, it's all the more special.

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 3 years ago Report

Having finished the story now, first thing to say is: great content, I enjoyed the scenario plenty.

I'll conjecture you're getting a lot of feedback because you have a lot more presence (lots of people view and are familiar with your content) than other vore creators who might make similar character personalities in similar scenarios.

I'll also entertain the idea that some of the commenters couldn't buy in as well with Gabi's attitude this time specifically. That's because this story in particular does a lot of third-person narrator justifications for her internal conflict rather than letting it be presented organically with events in the story, and to be frank I think it's the weaker writing choice when the writer is working with a protagonist with qualities that readers would find shameful and thus harder to appreciate.

At the end of the day, it can also just be strictly an issue of audience preferences and your content's high visibility. I don't actually *want* Gabi to be justified and specifically enjoy her as an egocentric hypocrite, and I think that kind of character just happens to end up maddening more people than it enthralls. If you've ever seen the Hetty comic by FaFComics (which only ended up with stuffing aside from a few "what-if" vore scenes as bonus scenes), commenters would get livid and declare their hate of the comic for just how greedy, inconsiderate, and arrogant the titular character acted, and for other viewers like me... that was the whole reason we were there to view it.

KingORANGE

Posted by KingORANGE 3 years ago Report

el chupracabra is free on a site btw

EvilFuzzy9

Posted by EvilFuzzy9 3 years ago Report

Ooh, fancy.