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Sofia is determined to become friends with a pelican on her visit to the beach today. She has a risky plan on how to get close enough to do so that involves fish oil and sunscreen, and may result in a different kind of encounter than she expected.
This was a commission for someone anonymous. It jumped the queue slightly as I needed a break from my usual giantess or cooking stories, My commission queue remains open, so get in touch via PM or Discord (BunnyWrites#4146) if you're interested in having me write you something.
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Posted by VictorBound 3 years ago Report
Honestly I'm a fan of the pelican as a pred, really do wish we would see more of it!
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Me too~ Fortunately there is a sequel planned with the same pelican and a couple more sorority girls at the beach~
Posted by VictorBound 3 years ago Report
oh nice! I will definitely look forward to that!
Posted by TheHumanPred 3 years ago Report
Love some good Bird Pred
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Yeah they're fun preds <3
Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report
Great story, just long enough for an easy yet entertaining reading. Pelicans are such fun creature when it comes to vore, nice work :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! It's a delight to hear you enjoyed it when in turn I've enjoyed quite a few of your short stories & art (I should comment more often when I do) <3
Posted by Spamurai 3 years ago Report
The world could definitely use more Pelican vore. :D Especially if BunnyWrites creates it. :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
And there's more pelican vore to come when the sequel eventually gets written~
Posted by AeriaGloris 3 years ago Report
What a delicious piece of writing! Sofia's naivety worked well.
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Thank you, that's very kind <3
I was a little worried her naivety might go to far and come across as silly, so I'm glad that wasn't the case when you read it.
Posted by AeriaGloris 3 years ago Report
Her recollection on her mother's chastisement sold her as a protected girl. Great work :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
It's a shame her mother never told her the story of little red riding hood more often~
Posted by Tassie 3 years ago Report
Pelicans are such magical creatures. This was a lot of fun to read. Thank you so much for making this.
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Thank you for reading and the lovely comment <3
Posted by nosuspicious 3 years ago Report
I should have read this sooner! I love the ending with the pelican moving onto other appetizing sunbathers and the authorities not knowing why so many are vanishing. I wonder if Sophia had any clue what she was starting…
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Thanks <3 And yeah after how it ended the commissioner was immediately interested in a sequel with the same pelican.