I honestly wish Brielle really had gotten eaten, though you surprised me with that redirection -- I liked Kaylee as a predator, and the dialog was VERY hot :3
I try to put myself in the headspace of each character. It's a small trait of my writing, where I personally act out the thoughts of each one, then bounce their responses against each personality.
Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report
Holy productivity!!! Keep kickin ass!!!
Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report
I honestly wish Brielle really had gotten eaten, though you surprised me with that redirection -- I liked Kaylee as a predator, and the dialog was VERY hot :3
Posted by vixingirl 3 years ago Report
Agreed! :3 I love the dialog!
Posted by Winny 3 years ago Report
I try to put myself in the headspace of each character. It's a small trait of my writing, where I personally act out the thoughts of each one, then bounce their responses against each personality.
So I'm happy you enjoyed the dialog~ <3