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We return to Kallo's orks in the aftermath of their vicious victory over the Sisters of Avelorn. While the river hags claim their due of elf flesh, the Scalped Ork Ramma is confronted with a conundrum - forced to choose between his unflinching loyalty to his master and the prospects of a new form of elven trickery.
Meanwhile, Al'lia must try to come to terms with being a captive of three loathsome river trolls along with a rapidly diminishing assortment of fellow captured maidens. Why are they rapidly diminishing? Well, let's just say a River Troll has a rather grim method of 'releasing' their hostages.
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Posted by ouphe 3 years ago Report
DAMNIT GHALRAK!
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Classic freakin' Ghalrak right there.
Posted by EnglishGamer 3 years ago Report
Very nice chapter, so many pretty elves becoming nothing but food. Bloody Trolls, even in Warhammer they are a pain.
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Indeed, them elf-ladies can't catch a break; the ultimate price for tasting nice.
Posted by TVSS 3 years ago Report
I already said what i thinking on Deviantart. But still, it's great work. Continue like that ! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Great chapter! Probably my favorite so far, at least with regards to the vore content!
Loved the atmosphere and descriptions, and I've been long-wondering how the aftermath of that battle would play out. This hit all the right notes - Very much enjoyed the emphasis on all those lovely, prideful, defiant elf-ladies being consigned to ignoble fates inside troll-stomachs. Not to mention their implied experience once eaten, with the subtle struggles and protests nervously observed by Al’lia. Sexy elf-maidens having a tough time remains among my most cherished themes. Easily some of my favorite kinky vore-bits I've read from you yet!
That said, the ending is also an intriguing cliffhanger, and by the look of things, the sexy elf-girls might be about to catch a break after all?
Because given the stellar track-record of Ramma and his boyz, I'd put my money on them vs the trolls (even if my experience with Total War: Warhammer tells me that regenerating monster-size units are pretty hard on melee-focused armies).
Even more intriguing though, is the message that spurred them into that conflict. Unless my shoddy memory is acting up, this raises some questions about what's happening back at the Sunderskull Encampment.
Why would he order the release & aid of the Avelorni?
Very curious . . . but depending on how things played out at the Sunderskull Encampment, could Taldeer's planned rescue have put him in a position where she could apply pressure in that direction? I'm eager to see the next chapter, that's for certain!
Anyway, sorry for the long, rambling comment there. I just kinda wrote it stream-of-consciousness.
Concise Version: Love the sexy voreness AND the mysterious, tense plotting! Looking forward to seeing where all the twists and turns (and elf-maidens) ultimately end up! Love how well this is all coming together, gotta say.
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Thank you, my friend! So glad you enjoyed it! Your comments are always a big boost and a big motivator! And yes, as a Warhammer guy myself, it is true that ork boyz tend to lack an anti-large bonus as well as a movement penalty for swampy terrain. Luckily, Rama is a hero character with high armor, so-damage and spell resistance (as all Sunderskull infantry has). Should be a good match, though he’ll have to hurry to save Al’lia. Elven maidens have a racial weakness to digestive damage!
Posted by frostiey 2 years ago Report
Well she should be cut out of that troll be fore she dies, i wonder how many will be cut out in total
Posted by EnglishGamer 2 years ago Report
Are you ever going to come back to this? There is criminally little Warhammer vore.