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Going Down By Mouthful -- Report

I saw several hot hunks out playing beer pong this afternoon and thought that my unnamed pred would love to get their lips around them.

This is the quickest I've ever written a story. I started it three hours ago and now here it is, all grown up and ready to send out into the world! It's called 'Going Down' because Trev goes down someone's throat while someone goes down on Trev. Clever, right? Not at all. Most of my stories could be called 'Going Down' because someone is always going down someone else's throat. I didn't want to spend more time thinking of a title than I did writing the story, so that's what we got. I might change it if I think of anything better.

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LucifersChef

Posted by LucifersChef 3 years ago Report

great story! I love some eager prey, and its real fun when they're showing off trying to attract a pred! Great work. And I feel you on the titles. Most of mine are slapped together at time of uploading, resulting in some absolutely terrible ones XD

Mouthful

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

I've come so close sometimes to just naming all of my stories after whichever dude gets eaten, but I can never bring myself to do it.

smukmave

Posted by smukmave 3 years ago Report

I feel like Lane really got the best of all possible worlds here… or maybe that’s just me being weird. Great story!

Mouthful

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

It definitely was a great night for Lane! I wonder if he pulled out in time the second go round or if our pred got a twofer for dessert?

maximeph

Posted by maximeph 3 years ago Report

No, no no, the ballsack only feels like fresh-baked cookies when you use cookie dough transformative first! I've done my research on this!

I read your stories. That's the research.

Mouthful

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

Our pred has obviously never experienced the delights of cookie dough made from actual boy balls otherwise they never would have made the comparison. Trev's balls were sweet & soft & warm and fresh-baked cookies were the first comparable thing that popped into their head. Actually, now that I think about it, I believe that it's way past time for this particular pred to pay a visit to their local boy bakery and sample some of the wares.

maximeph

Posted by maximeph 3 years ago Report

I'm down to read about this. He obviously has a very flexible appetite. And honestly, he could afford to eat something he gets to actually chew on before swallowing.

Madock345

Posted by Madock345 3 years ago Report

I’m not opposed to some chewing

Mouthful

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

That's two votes for more chewing!

zidanes123

Posted by zidanes123 3 years ago Report

This was pretty hot

Mouthful

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

Thanks!