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Tags: Adult adult pred adult/child Baby baby prey Child predator child prey. child/baby child/child Cruel Pred Detailed bulges detailed outlines Digestion disregard for human life disregard for life Disregard of Life F/F F/fm F/M f/multiple Fatal Feeding Prey to Pred feeding the pred Female Pred Female Prey Helping out helping the pred hyper pregnancy Implied Digestion implied scat infant infant prey loli pred Male Prey Mass Vore massive belly mayternity Mother and daughter predators Mother teaching daughter Multiple Preds Multiple Preys Oral Vore Poker Pregnancy pregnant belly pregnant pred pregnant with child Prey Outline shota prey Sibling Pred Sibling Prey Siblings sister pred sister prey sister vore Sister/Sister sleeping prey Teaching how to vore teaching pred teaching vore toddler Toddler pred toddler prey Unbirth uncaring observer Uncaring Observers uncaring prey Underage pred Underage prey Weight Gain Willing Willing Pred Willing prey Young pred young prey Younger pred Younger Prey
Poker night with the gals gets pretty wild.
Constructive criticisms and tag suggestions are welcome. No mean shit though, please.
Also, does anyone know any other writing programs besides docs and word? The stories don't look like how they're written when they're posted to the sight and I'd like to change that.
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Posted by Mikelblood13 1 year ago Report
Good story
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
There’s skrivener
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
Huh?
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
It’s a writing program, used by a couple full time author friends i chat with
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
Sorry spelled it wrong. Scrivener is the proper spelling
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
Ah! Thanks!
Posted by TheWanderingTrio 1 year ago Report
Would PDF's work out for you? You can save stories as them by hitting the printer button in docs and saving it as a PDF.
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
I personally don't like PDF's. I would rather just read it on the site. Thanks for the suggestion though.
Posted by supernova1324 1 year ago Report
Great work always great to see more baby prey around!
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
Yeah. There's never enough.
Posted by TETRO 1 year ago Report
Really interesting concept. I personally prefer a little more details with disposal, but that's just my preference. Good stuff overall. I too would like to know of a better word processor than just Docs or Word.
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
Thanks. I was actually inspired by a my hero academia story from Draconatedz where the girls play strip poker in a similar fashion. But I only took the poker idea.
Posted by Das096 1 year ago Report
Ive come to say "mean shit!" And you cant stop me! >.>
Also a friend of mine suggested double spacing and indenting paragraphs for stories here,that may help. :3
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
I'll try that too. I write with my phone for convenience but for some dumb reason, indenting paragraphs isn't a function that's available for the mobile docs app. It's really frustrating. I guess I'll just have to start writing with my computer.
Posted by TETRO 1 year ago Report
Sometimes you just have to take a mean shit.
Posted by HMDVore 1 year ago Report
GOod stuff. I do wish all the kids got eaten though ;3
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
I honestly could've gone both ways. I liked both ideas and I honestly to God flipped a coin and where the story went is what it landed on.
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
I think so too. To often are they the prey.
Posted by Indighost 1 year ago Report
Good story!
Posted by LightDragon 1 year ago Report
Wow... this story legit made me cry. I don't think it was the intention so... don't really know if that's a compliment or not, but I found it terrifying.
The complete disregard for human life, especially for children lives, and especially from the children's own parents, the infanticide subtext... That goes far beyond the usual base of just being eaten alive... That's some psychological horror level...
The writing is good but yeah, the story made me cry. If I had a critic to make, it would be that the kids are way too passive, and their reactions to being eaten is not even close to credible.
Although, I'd almost say, thankfully, because if they were trying to escape, question what's happening, or plea for their life, this could be really painful to read.
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
It's mostly because of the world they grew up in where it was normal. Sorry. Didn't mean to make you cry. But if this story made you cry then this fetish may not be for you
Posted by LightDragon 1 year ago Report
Nah don't worry ^^
I'm very comfortable with vorarephilia in general, but there's a huge gap between a cat eating a mouse and parents betting their children in a poker game XD
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
I understand and I don't want to bash or anything like that. I've got no room to talk or anything but I mean, whole vore thing is based on the general disregard for life, isn't it?
Posted by kingarthur0205 1 year ago Report
But you're right. I definitely went a little harder on that theme than I usually do and what other people do.
Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report
Libre Office is a free word processor, I use it all the time. Also, when you upload, use the 'doc' format, not docx. Eka's doesn't like docx for some reason.
Posted by Xyk 1 year ago Report
Wow, what a fantastic story. This both featured a few more niche subsections of vore that I particularly enjoy and was very well paced, having just enough dialogue to break up (but not interrupt) the various vore sequences. I think that having the kind of vore vary a bit throughout the story kept things fresh, while having the repeated vore from Annabelle not focus too heavily on the details past the first and last prey she had, was very well done. But over all I just really liked this story and I’m excited to see whatever else you share next!
Posted by Kelly 1 year ago Report
Awesome story
Posted by Yumyum18 6 months ago Report
Talk about a high STEAKS game