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The Carter Family Market [2/3] By TheRealRD -- Report

A 2nd-person story where, after losing your job with no hope for the future, you go to work at your dad's supermarket. The Dolcett Act recently passed and he's eager to cash in on the human meat craze over Memorial Day weekend. But when his shipment of longpigs is delayed, your dad and brother offer you an insane amount of money to just pretend to be a meatgirl for the weekend to help drum up sales.

What could go wrong?

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Uri

Posted by Uri 2 years ago Report

I've been checking for they everyday and I'm not disappointed at all! I'm more par for the corse when the degradation is mostly focused on treating the girls like objects/meat but I'm not against humiliating them like this either!

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 1 year ago Report

Thanks again for reading and commenting, Uri! If I may ask, what about the degradation featured in this story differs from the ideal degradation in your fantasies?
To be clear, I'm not trying to be contrary at all -- I'm honestly curious, so please let me know!

Uri

Posted by Uri 1 year ago Report

My ideal degradation? Hm, well for starters it doesn't really include verbal humiliation, atleast not intentional verbal humiliation. Comments made specifically to shame or mock the person just feel needlessly cruel and counter intuitive. It implies that they're still trying to bring them down to the level of a food object rather than just treating them like they’re already a food object. The teacher and other girls all mocking, insulting, or even just laughing at her implies (to me) that she isn’t quite a food object in their minds yet, more a human slave with added benefits.

Comments made that degrade the person in an objective manner is what I like. When people talk at them rather than with them as they’re physically examining the person’s body. Discussing what parts of the person will make for good eating, all while ignoring any and all discomforts or feelings said person might be feeling (or in some cases voicing). Remarking on how many people they’ll be able to feed, the quality of the meat, or even just what they’ll enjoy most not only does a better job (In my opinion) of objectifying the person as nothing more than a food object, but it also diminishes any accomplishments they may have or would ever make in favor of them being a food object.

Had the teacher just made comments while physically examining Beth about getting to watch as such a perfect specimen was raised up right and what parts of her would make for good eating to me implies grades be damned. Whatever other future she might have had, no matter how bright, isn’t worth it compared to her value as meat.

A lot of my enjoyment stems from the friction between the two opposing states of being a unique, irreplaceable person to being just so much more meat. Like when Beth was initially only playing a role to assist in making her family's store better profits. Like there is some invisible line that can be crossed, where her value is worth more as meat then as a person while she’s working. Only to later cross the line again later in the day where her value is worth more as an individual when she’s off work.

It really sells an aspect I love in cannibalism fantasies where women are people, they're intelligent, creative, passionate, and beautiful. They're mothers, daughters, nieces, and aunts, but they're also one more thing, a thing that can outweigh all the others. They're meat, food to be cooked and eaten.

Reading over this, I feel like I absolutely suck at articulating what I enjoy about the fantasy. So if you want to ask about some specific part of my incoherent ramblings feel free to ask here or DM me.

KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 2 years ago Report

I wonder how long until Cody winds up as a male longpig as well?

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 1 year ago Report

That's a very interesting supposition, Kaiser. There's no end to the torments that could befall any gender, if they're unlucky enough to be chosen.

Badviper

Posted by Badviper 2 years ago Report

I love this so much. I wish I could comment more helpfully, but aye. xP

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 1 year ago Report

Sorry for the delay in response, but this is MORE than enough, my friend. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me, seriously.

Genericcook

Posted by Genericcook 2 years ago Report

Holy hell another amazing chapter, I had this story on the brain while I was sadly indisposed from an internet connection.

Just really incredible work!

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 1 year ago Report

No worries at all, my friend! I really appreciate you reading and commenting. I hope I keep your brain indisposed for years to come, LOL!

DarkSideOfTheSun

Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 2 years ago Report

I have to admit, the story is way too mean for my general likes :/ I just can't help but feel bad for Beth. I'm kinda rooting for her to get away, but knowing where I'm writing this, I doubt she will. I just hope that someone that actually deserves her gets her!

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 1 year ago Report

Thank you SO MUCH for reading and commenting, DSS! I love your work to an incredible degree, so this comment means a lot to me.
I fucking LOVE that you're rooting for Beth -- because I agree she's one of my most fleshed-out (tee hee!) characters -- but even moreso that you're cognizant enough of context clues to understand that Beth is absolutely going to die as meat.
C'est la vie!

tsukaistarburst

Posted by tsukaistarburst 1 year ago Report

Part of me would love to read about Beth's last week alive and then roasting.