Posted by Cactaur98 2 years ago Report

YES! NEW CONTENT!….
Nah, this can’t be real. I must be dreaming…

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Glad to see you always on the lookout haha, it's nice to have a longform vorefic to finally put out after so long

Posted by Cactaur98 2 years ago Report

And might I add it was a MAGNIFICENT ONE! Possibly your greatest work yet!
(Though it’s so hard to choose)

Posted by Agate 2 years ago Report

Wow what a Great Story,I also really liked The ending of the Mikeneko part,Fandeads must watch out,Since there’s now a Voracious Rushia on the Loose~

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

With her fans' devotion, I wouldn't be surprised if she even up even more bloated than her genmate~

Posted by FireChicken88 2 years ago Report

I am so THANKFUL that someone with your talent decided to write something based off that incredible pic/scenario. Sincerely one of the best fics I’ve ever read. I kneel to you, oh great one!

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

I could hope for nothing better than it sparking some inspiration in you, you really pioneered the gluttonous chuuba scene

Posted by ItsSongxing 2 years ago Report

There are several layers of horny going on here, and I'm absolutely here for it. Always love fat Senchou.

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Thanks, I've been trying to up the level of horny lately, seems somehow counterintuitively rare to see actual fapping and fugging in fapfics

Posted by pbysteria 2 years ago Report

the best possible outcome of a gluttonous predator with many adoring fans

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

The only proper thing to do when you've got hundreds of strapping young men pining after you is to generously make use of them, down to the very last calorie~

Posted by mazdab 2 years ago Report

Great story! Hoping Nazuna will copy what senchou did ;)

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Certainly! After tonight, she's a changed girl; she'll go the gold no matter how many pounds of useless flab she has to put on to get there~

Posted by OofKing124 2 years ago Report

I keep confusing you with Stygianrook lol.

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Funny about that, so have a lot of other writers and artists the first time we've interacted lol. Rook's cool, his own Senchou partly inspired the second half of this fic, actually

Posted by Draconatedz 2 years ago Report

Excellent story, and this is coming from someone who knows very little of vtubers. I really enjoyed the full display of hedonistic fulfillment, along with the corruption of Rushia. Casually eating all the other idols of her group on a mere hungry whim was also soooo good. Hope to see more stories like this from you in the future!

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Glad you could find something to enjoy, that sort of downward moral spiral is kind of my bread and butter haha. The planning/outlining for this one went particularly well, so I hope I can continue to live up to that standard

Posted by Assimilation 2 years ago Report

To begin, I'm happy to see your writing again! Some of my watches are a "run, don't walk" when I see new content notifications. You've placed in that podium, my friend.

Now, unlike with most of your other works, I am *quite* familiar with the IP in question, down to the entire Rushia -> Nazuna situation. And my god, you do such a good job reading their actual personas and translating them into your own vore-tinged versions in a wholly believable capacity. There is a balancing act between communicating a character's discarding of inhibitions and keeping the tight pacing of good smut (non-pejorative), and you seem to never have trouble with it. It might be easy enough to start the pussy-poppin' Marine in a fan meet-n-fuck without betraying her character, but it was a smart choice to place Mikeneko in her state of whirlwind emotion from her recent termination—this way, she's already primed for explosive changes.

As for vore preferences, you slice it all exactly the way I want: always pleased to see debauchery, morality loss, and a flippant disregard for personal relations alongside systematized mass vore.

The two-act progression for this story with a perspective change, by the way, was so good. You present Marine at 150% from prey within the scenario, then we get a satisfying mini-climax rather than a story midpoint; after a jump-cut to Marine at 400% from an observer Rushia viewpoint, we basically get a whole second (but directly related) story with the climax proper. Building the latter off the former made for a really solid story structure.

Last thing I wanted to comment on is your writing in terms of formatting, actually. In my opinion, written works are not medium-agnostic; a piece is written for all the constraints of its publication, whether that's a newspaper column, online article, or a web-layout rich text box. Given that last list item, I think it's downright bold to use so much typographical emphasis, because it's usually distracting when laid on too thickly—but goddamn did you still make it work, especially because you mainly reserved it for the dialogue of two characters that are both very particular in their cadences. Frankly, I'm also going to steal how you liberally use ♥ and ♪ as tone indicators alongside the more traditional ~, since it was fucking everywhere and yet I didn't truly notice until finishing and doing a lighter skim for this comment.

I've said more than enough here. Flatly TL;DR'd, I think you're a very inspired and skillful writer, and this is a well-crafted work. Thanks for all you write! :)

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

I just wanna let you know I'm always thankful for these little analyses, they help understand what's hitting and/or missing better. I always hope to continue improving the more I crank out. Even this fic right here made critical use of the sex-scene writing experiment from my tamer Suisei fic from the /ag/ archive

Posted by 4KKC 2 years ago Report

(´｡• ᵕ •｡) ♡

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much for the amazing inspiration!

Posted by Zoelovesguts 2 years ago Report

The morality loss and growing voracity of your preds is always amazing~
That little reveal at the end was some of the hottest and most well written vore stuff ive read

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Haha, I'm glad it had its intended effect! Tinkered with the pacing there for a good bit until it sounded right

Posted by NotMax 2 years ago Report

Finally got around to reading this, amazing read the whole way through. Especially loved the use of onomatopoeia and other such effects, really gave the whole thing a new dimension. I don't know anything about hololive but this character is excellent, especially how blatant she is about where her fans will end up. Overall top stuff.

Posted by StygianSkies 2 years ago Report

Glad you enjoyed! I went a little hard on the text morphing this time, glad it generally seems to have worked out instead of feeling too overdone. I'm planning to strike a neater balance with it in future works (which'll probably be easier in the absence of extended sex scenes lol)

Thanks for the watch by the way!

Posted by NotMax 2 years ago Report

I'm a fan of sound effects and morphs and the like because they break up walls of words really nicely while adding to the story.

Also you're welcome!

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

This is one of the hottest things I've ever read