Holy crap that was exceptionally hot! Freaking love how you wrote Razer, esp the casual dominance when he's telling the guy he's not a person any more~ Heck that was amazing <3
A whole nest of kobolds then a delicious human! Razer had quite a feast, haha.
His confidence is /great/ - you can feel his control over the situation the entire story. The humans didn't test him but were a bit leery to, while he analyzed their capabilities and weren't particularly concerned. Let alone the kobolds.
I also like little details - the idle thoughts help make Razer feel more, well, real. Little things like how his mentor would clearly recognize his poor stance, or recalling liking the human's popcorn. And of course, no real hesitation - just 'Welp, here's my cock food' and down the clearly unnamed guy went, haha.
Posted by Fintaffet 2 years ago Report
Holy crap that was exceptionally hot! Freaking love how you wrote Razer, esp the casual dominance when he's telling the guy he's not a person any more~ Heck that was amazing <3
Posted by LucifersChef 2 years ago Report
thank you <3
Posted by Garz 2 years ago Report
A whole nest of kobolds then a delicious human! Razer had quite a feast, haha.
His confidence is /great/ - you can feel his control over the situation the entire story. The humans didn't test him but were a bit leery to, while he analyzed their capabilities and weren't particularly concerned. Let alone the kobolds.
I also like little details - the idle thoughts help make Razer feel more, well, real. Little things like how his mentor would clearly recognize his poor stance, or recalling liking the human's popcorn. And of course, no real hesitation - just 'Welp, here's my cock food' and down the clearly unnamed guy went, haha.
Cool story ^_^
Posted by LucifersChef 2 years ago Report
Aw thanks <3 That means a lot from the premiere orc author on here :D
Posted by studmonkey 2 years ago Report
Orcs are just the best in every context x_x