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Things start to settle down; life goes on (or ends in a belly, for some). But even as the world continues to turn, the consequences of the past don't disappear. But they can be resolved.

I really like this moment between Fiona and Jack. Not sure if everyone will, but I think it highlights them well as characters. The fact that Fiona would so fight against her own nature, and that Jack would go so far in trying to respect a nature so seemingly alien and dangerous. The following moment with Sarabeth is interesting too...

Speaking of which, her birthday party looks like it'll be fun, huh? Now, I know normally the whole 'asking a lady's age' thing doesn't really apply to kids, but what can I say? Sarabeth is *extra* formal, so she starts early. Also, gives us a fun excuse to never reveal her exact age.

Sorry for the long wait between this one and the last. It was written to directly follow the previous one and actually picks up from where Jack's perspective ended in said chapter. Guess you might need to reread that one to refresh yourself. Hope Harry finds those glasses.

Anyway, this long awaited chapter was brought to you, as always, in collaboration with series co-creator  x9comega. If you wanna check out the rest of the series, you can find it all here:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

And, if you want to chat with us, or other fans of this series, or if you want to share fan-art, theories or anything else, you can join our HNTBL Discord server. That way you can see our much more frequent apologies for taking too long, instead of just the ones I post here! Check it out if you're interested:
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Skittles209

Posted by Skittles209 2 years ago Report

So not an immortal vampire but a slow aging one?

Skittles209

Posted by Skittles209 2 years ago Report

Or vampire in a different sense. Vampire possibly being closest term used to describe them. Like how there are vampire bats. And they are not immortal.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

No, not an immortal vampire. More the "closest term" thing. Vampires in HNTBL are technically bat demis. They look fairly human but with bat-like ears and great hearing. But they're vampire-like in that they have fangs and do something unusual when they bite you.

sadcat

Posted by sadcat 2 years ago Report

Relationship up! lez gooo~

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report

You know, I feel like Jack keeps making tiny steps of progress with Sarabeth. Little itsy bitsy baby steps, but steps nonetheless.

That doesn't mean something HORRENDOUS won't happen at her party, of course. I do believe her position is still "don't get caught."

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Guess we’ll see if Jack can manage get work his way into Sarabeth’s heart, rather than her stomach.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report

True! But he's on the right track, if there IS a "right track." She did already save him once, even if her reasons weren't entirely pure.

Also, I appreciate the irony of "he won't be needing those glasses anymore" as a follow-up to the previous chapter.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 2 years ago Report

Being rude to predators is seldom a good idea. If they would ordinarily have empathy for their prey you might be giving them just what they need to get past that, if they don't your probably just bringing attention to yourself.

It'll be interesting to see Sarabeth's party. From the human perspective I suspect it'll be something more like survival horror.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Very true. This party promises to be an interesting affair.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

You have no idea how happy I am that a new chapter is finally out. Been waiting so long.
But, I am a bit oncerned for Jack, can't help but think think party might not go the way he wants.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

You're not the only one! Sorry for the wait, but it can't be helped sometimes. But concern for Jack? Don't know what would give you cause for concern. He's only going into a party presumably full of preds, hosted by one who secretly wants him dead. Nothing at all dangerous about that. Nuh-uh.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

Yeah you are right, I'm sure there is nothing to be worried about.
I mean, it's perfectly safe to leave Jack alone with Sissy, so surely it'll be ok to bring him to a party full of Preds where he can be lost in the crowd and Fiona can be distracted.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

See, now you’re getting it! XD

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

Except that Sissy wanted to eat Jack in Chapter 59, but she couldn't because she was already digesting some other unlucky human she devoured earlier that day.
Mind you, she resisted to eat him after Jack let her at least suck on his hand, so you're making a good point.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

I think you misunderstood the sarcasm.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

That was sarcasm? Forgive me. I don't exactly understand sarcasm.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

After the last party? This is more like bringing a sheep to a wolf's den, and expecting everyone else to leave your sheep alone when there's a whole flock on the menu.

Also, how would Sarabeth's parents and family would react to their "special guest"?

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

The last party was almost literally bringing Jack to a wolf’s den. But yeah, obvious danger. As for everyone’s reaction, you’ll have to wait and see.

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

I really don't know why I'm shipping Jack and Sarabeth.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

XD
Well, someone's gotta I guess. It would 100% be Jack Beatricia if that happened, though. No way Sarabeth would be taking the last name Eten.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Or join Fiona's "wolf pack" to get a package deal. Talk about a twofold prize, 2 for 1!

Perodian

Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report

This party feels like another one of Sarabeth's schemes. Even if she tells people not to eat Jack, I think there's someone who might try anyways. So she could have the excuse that she explained things but oh no someone didn't care.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

I'm sure she will try her hardest.
...I'm not specifying what her goal would be, but I'm sure she'd try her hardest.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

I would like to see more detail on the digestion, I am just image Fiona laying on Jack as she digests.

What is Fiona age.

Also how are there any humans in high school. Demographics seems to be this setting big lie, it just bugs me.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

I like to sprinkle in more detailed digestion, but I keep it rare and special. There will be more detailed scenes in the future.

I don't have exact ages for any characters. Jack and Fiona are about the same age and in high school. They're teenagers.

How are there any humans in high school? That's easy! Magic!

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Aren't they both 15 by the group meeting when Jack said he was marked when he was 5, and Chapter 1 said it was a 10 year time skip?

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Good memory. They're "like 15". Not saying they aren't 15, just that it's intentionally a bit vague the way I've written it. (I appreciate the chapter callouts so I can cross check it myself ^^;)

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Chapter 28, and Chapter 1.

Daduke

Posted by Daduke 2 years ago Report

How rare are human/pred relationships? Like theres a balance between preds who care some and who don't but the scale seems weighted in the not caring. So are such close bonds like 1/100,000?

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Well, I couldn't put a number to it, but it'd say pretty few and far between. Few and far enough that we haven't really run into any others in the story.

VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 2 years ago Report

Well this was a gooder for sure, I look forward to seeing what happens next.

1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 8 months ago Report

Nice to see jack and fi communicating. Yeah i called it about harry