Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report

A father does whatever it takes to protect his son, even becoming that which he dislikes.

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

Good times between son and father are needed definitely.

Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report

Yep. Might need to do something that's a "Quiet Time" item in this world.

Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report

I would more of this series, I love the banter back and forth and cooking scenes

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

In that case, I'd recommend my "Traitors and Turncoats" where a member of the Resistance discovers an unsettling secret, as well as my interactive "After the Were War" where after the war against Weres, society tries to rebuild.

Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report

I did love that also. Something about Fox hunt that I loved. Maybe the TF, and cooking ? Is it possible to revisit this and add some details on the devouring of Susan Jones? with a bit of Disposal ?

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

To be honest, I doubt that I'd make an addition detailing Susan Jones' fate. It would probably be something like this -

"Sally's eyes bulged in fear as Crystal's mouth opened wide. The human's scream was cut off, as the fox's jaws clamped over her head. The vixen then made quick work of the woman, sending her down into her stomach.

A few hours later, Crystal made the first of many trips, using one of several large plastic containers for her waste material. Eventually, a skull came out of the vixen.

'All you were was just a pain in the ass,' Crystal said, as she continued her business.

A few days later, Crystal and a high ranking agent in the Master Hunters were looking at a printout, that had performed an analysis of the remains.

'Remains identified as Sally Jones - Wanted Dead or Alive for Crimes Against Humanity, among others,' the agent said. 'Well, Crystal, seems that I'm authorized to hand you the bounty that was upon this War Criminal's head.'

'Split that into two checks,' said Crystal. 'Steve gets half the reward.'

'Understood,' the agent said. 'Still, he was handsomely paid for the bounty on George Silvertail and his Secret Claw Remnant forces.'

'Steve gave me the info to find Sally, and lost his son's mother to her,' said Crystal. 'I owe him that much.'

'Alright, I'll get on it.'

Crystal walked away from the Master Hunter center, with a check for herself, and one for Steve, a chapter of their war now closed."

Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report

Yes. that was a nice way to leave the world, thru the digestive track of a fox.

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

Personally, I prefer non-fatal vore, and I only do fatal vore in certain situations (dead/dying prey, self-defense, or if the predator is a murderer or an executioner), and disposal is only if it would add something to the story, like to show respect to a worthy prey (like a last good-bye), or disrespect to one that wasn't (a final insult or two).

Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report

You are a talented writer. I do love fatal, cooking, teasing and slow digestion

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

To be fair, my main pet peeve is the idea of Healthy Prey that wants to be in a Fatal scenario, and they see it as sexy. For me, it's a highly sinful form of suicide. It's like thinking that blowing your head off with a gun is sexy, or slitting your throat and bleeding to death is sexy, or strangling yourself / snapping your neck in order to die is sexy, or any other method to intentionally kill yourself is sexy.

In short, I don't see death as sexy.

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

In case you're interested, I have made a branch involving Crystal Firetail, with the first chapter being the demise of Susan Jones.

Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report

yes i am

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

Got it posted. Now, I'm trying to figure out who is leaving red links in it.