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Story 241 - Mariella and Caramel - part 3 By French_snack -- Report

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doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

And just like that caramel is on her way to adding to mariellas butt

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

By tomorrow, that's where she'll be. :) She just needs to let Mariella have time to digest her, and then she'll be part of the lovely smooth round underside curve of Mariella's left buttock!

Or at least, that's where she wants to be, and that's where Mariella will imagine her as being, when she thinks back fondly on their time together. :)

Namarie1

Posted by Namarie1 1 year ago Report

And just like that… it’s all over.

I must confess, I find myself feeling a bit melancholic after the thrill of finally, FINALLY seeing Caramel vanish down someone’s gullet forever and ever. Leaving naught but a satisfied, elated, and OH SO LUCKY pred. Soon to be gurgled and digested all up like every other meal that Mariella has ever consumed.

But as they say, “all good things must come to an end” and Caramel was a very, very good thing indeed.

I only dream that I may follow her to an equally lucky and joyful fate, or catch a prey as positively wondrous and teasy and full of life as she.

But until then, thank you, Frenchsnack. The long wait was well worth it.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Ahh, yes, if we could be as lucky as Caramel... Well, we have our fantasies, at least!

And for now, Mariella will be digesting her healthily, while she sleeps cuddled up and satiated in Klaas' arms...

TMVore

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

I must confess; Your numbering of the stories had kept me away from reading any, fearing it would be a universe I couldn't step into.

That and micro has not been a main focus for me, one could say I get a bit micro-curious at times.

So today I took the step as this story stood out to me, And I have no regrets.

Your writing is amazing and the build up.. I honestly can't recall anything like that elsewhere.

I'll keep a micro-curious eye on you from now on ^.-

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I'm lucky that other writers have been inspired to write stories in this universe too.

If you want to navigate through them or select from them, there's a reference page:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/882143

Bellyache

Posted by Bellyache 1 year ago Report

Supreme work yet again! That was some journey through Caramel's vore fantasies to her ultimate resting place on Mariella's fine ass.

I bet she worked that girl off in quick time with Klaas in bed afterwards.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I'm very glad you've enjoyed it. Not a bad place for Caramel to be, is it? I'm sure she'll be happy as part of Mariella's shapely and enticing bottom. ;)

And you're right, Mariella probably got her digestion stimulated with all that physical exercise. It was probably a wild ride for Caramel inside her stomach!

Kerhs

Posted by Kerhs 1 year ago Report

This is really good! I admit I kinda wished it had a disposal ending, but it was very enjoyable regardless!

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! It was fun to write. :)

This seemed like a good place to end the story, but I must admit, I do wonder how Mariella felt when she experienced a... call of nature the next day.

Kerhs

Posted by Kerhs 1 year ago Report

Potential material for a part 4? I’m kind of kidding, the ending here was very good! I’m a big fan of your stories, I’m just generally quiet on here.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

I'll leave it to your imagination. ;) Thanks again; I'll be writing another IVC story as soon as I have time!

Kerhs

Posted by Kerhs 1 year ago Report

Very good to hear! I’m excited to read it!

Miridium

Posted by Miridium 1 year ago Report

Very well done! The relationship between Ella and Caramel was beautifully explored. My only complaint is a bit of pacing issues around the middle. Other than that, it's a good read!

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I think it was quite an experience for both Caramel and Mariella, and it'll be something for Mariella to look back on!

Caramel enjoyed playing alpha female, but in the end, she's just very happy to end up in Mariella's hot gurgly tummy. ;)

Miridium

Posted by Miridium 1 year ago Report

You're welcome. I hope we get to see more works from you.

lazylayjay

Posted by lazylayjay 1 year ago Report

That was loads of fun. It was interesting that Caramel chose the latest celebrity pred after Cherry was her favorite as a teen. I guess now she can travel the world as Mariella’s butt lol

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks. I think even Caramel herself wasn't quite sure why she chose Mariella; it was an impulse, spur of the moment. She simply liked her, and wanted to slip down her throat. But you're right: There may be a subconscious trend there, going back to her teenage years.

Ha, yes, she'll be there travelling to different countries with the Vore Tour, as part of the curve of Mariella's shapely bottom! :D

CorruptedBiology

Posted by CorruptedBiology 1 year ago Report

A very enjoyable story. Caramel may be gone but she will not be forgotten, I wonder if some of her adventurous spirit will be transferred to Mariella now that she’s been absorbed into her

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks. And Caramel certainly hopes so! But I think Mariella will remain risk-averse and avoid scary adrenaline rushes. ;)

Lipsy

Posted by Lipsy 1 year ago Report

Willing f/f is my favorite and this was right on the money :D

Would love to be little spy in that bedroom when Mariella and Klaas get it on!

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Caramel, at least, will be experiencing what Mariella and Klaas do, from inside Mariella's tummy. ;)

kbDArt

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

Very nice story. I like that you went back and really developed Cara's backstory - it gives the ending that extra oomph.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks. She certainly lived life to the full. :)