Posted by ThribbyQuelch 5 months ago Report

Good Stuff! I love sci-fi dystopian settings like this! Cant wait to see more

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks! I rather enjoyed dreaming up this setting, with such a contrast between goofy Sci-Fi camp, and extremely 'played straight' consequences for those who are eaten. It will probably end up having more parts sometime.

Posted by Neuro 5 months ago Report

Ho-ly, this is nothing short of fantastic! The detail, the worldbuilding, the delicious fates of an entire team… oh, what I would give to be able to watch all of those cheerleaders slowly and agonizingly digesting together! You did an absolutely fantastic job on this,

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks so much! I'm glad enjoyed, and weren't put off by the somewhat extended amount of worldbuilding stuff.

Well, a slow, agonizing digestion is just the risk those cheerleaders have to take, if they want to participate in Vore-Ball . . . and participation in Vore-Ball is mandatory, of course.

Posted by V 5 months ago Report

I always love these types of alien gameshow/competition concepts. Great short story!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks! I really love the blend of goofy Sci-Fi and dark humor this setup allows, I gotta say. xD

Posted by GGO 5 months ago Report

I love your stories!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thank you!

Posted by jimmypootron 5 months ago Report

Glad to see you back! I was a little worried on how you might pull this off but you smashed it! I loved the auction part, the idea that some aliens might be watching this sport as an all you can eat sport rather than an actual sport is great. Some of those aliens even waiting to get their hand/tentacles on some to try for themselves. As always love to hear anything new from you!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks a bunch!

Yeah, it was a fair amount of work, but I'm pretty happy with the overall direction I went with this. This setting is heavy on 'space babe' aliens, and giant horny and/or hungry space monsters, with little in between, but work for what it is, I think. xD

Posted by 2Ron2R 5 months ago Report

Yay, it's finally out!

Who wants to bet Zoomy is just allergic to human?

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks!

And who knows? Earth is pretty in the dark still, when it comes to alien anatomy. xD

Posted by Omny87 5 months ago Report

Normally I don't care if the odds are against the prey's favor, but I'm rooting for Tracy and her team to win, classic underdog style. At the very least I really hope those alien rich bitches get their comeuppance in the next chapter. Maybe involving tentacles cumming up in them :P

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the classic underdog setup I've got going on . . . though given the nature of what I write, who knows how it will pan out! (Truthfully, I'm not 100% sure on where I'll got with the next chapter yet)

Posted by alexanderrea7 5 months ago Report

Amazing ;) reminds me of Moga's galactic vore pictures and a writer called Chewwy. I hope the sloggoths are hungry though ;) such a waste not to eat their slaves too.

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks so much! That's very high praise indeed! :D

Posted by alexanderrea7 5 months ago Report

I've heard of shoggoths. Love to see something continued. The series that this reminded me of is a written series by cheewy about ladies wrestling big snakes. If they survive for a period like your story they get a reward.none have so far.

Posted by DrakentheBlack 5 months ago Report

That is awesome! Funny that the earth mascots people almost have to be trying to be eaten by, yet the aliens prove all they have to do is dominate their opponents enough to give their slow mascot enough time to get a good meal. And of course, earthlings going up against an alien team are going to be like gradeschool baseball players going against the MLB!

I also loved the ending for the losing team, having to spend almost twenty years getting ravaged in a tentacle monster's belly. I think they get the better deal than the cheerleaders in the slug; at least their sadistic torture won't end with them being dead by dawn XD

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks!

Yeah, Earth had definitely been playing amateur-league Vore-Ball up until now, so their introduction to the wider stage is gonna result in a lot of sexy ladies having a rough time. x3

It's true, 20 years as a sex-slave to a tentacle monster might seem harsh, but it's still better than the alternative. Vore-Ball girls have it tough I guess! x3

Posted by Courier3227 5 months ago Report

I really want to know what they’re saying while they’re digested. Great stuff showing them internally but I want to know what they’re saying after they reach the stomach. Or if one of the girls she humiliated would appear in a humiliating way internally and they all notice her digesting

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks!

In terms of what they're saying, it's probably not terribly coherent, probably mostly stuff like "Mmmmmph!", "Oh God", "Let me out" etc. etc. xD

Posted by Courier3227 5 months ago Report

You’re the author you can make then say whatever. It would be coherent their faces didn’t melt.. yet.

Posted by Nalzindar 5 months ago Report

Nice story. Once more you prove that being a cheerleader is a hazardous occupation, even during the age of space exploration and intergalactic diplomacy. Or maybe it is because of jus that XD

Per usual, the poor girls didn't have much chance, and with Silva as the sole survivor, one might wonder why the governments of the earth can be so cynical when it comes down to their own women.

The slug creature was awesome and it got quite a meal out of the unfortunate team. It is almost too bad it didn't leave anyone to participate in the second round.

On another note, I would looove to see a sexy space babe or two being taken down a peg and join the earth girls in their peril :3

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks!

Yeah, the hazards of being a cheerleader surely have only intensified in this future. But earning currency that the hyper-advanced alien civilizations actually want is super critical to Earth's prosperity . . . and Vore-Ball is the only practical way to do it currently. xD

That's one of the fun things about this setting: I can really build up some uncertainty and tension, since whichever team wins, vore happens, so outcomes can be far less predictable. Will Tracy & friends pull an upset against the alien babes, or suffer the same fate as Silvia's team? Stay tuned to find out! :P

Posted by VividLucidity 5 months ago Report

While it is a bit of a strange thing to focus on, I gotta say, I really do like the Voreball system you have set up here. It sounds like a reasonable system where the rules make sense and would give an entertaining game. Plus the whole background worldbuilding and the world justifies such an attitude to such a sport. And who knows, maybe future rounds have some 'special rules' to spice things up and keep it interesting.

It is a nice change of pace for your work Prinnydood, and I hope to see more of it in the future!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks a bunch! I'm really glad to hear you liked this, and the amount of space dedicated to 'Voreball Lore' wasn't excessive. xD It was definitely a real concern but it seems like more people didn't mind.

And yes, I even dropped a little hint in this one that quite a few varieties of Voreball rules exist, so there's plenty of room to mix it up if I want to.

Posted by VividLucidity 5 months ago Report

Considering how vore focused your previous stories tend to be, having a piece more focused on Voreball Lore (Vore Lore, if you will~) can be a welcome change of pace. Besides, if one is here kust for the 'action', it isn't too hard to just scroll past.

One more comment I'd like to make. With the outcome of the human pkayers, I was a little surprised to see them be bought by those tentacle creatures. Like sure, in hindsight, considering your past works having them be ravished by tentacles is completely par for the course. I suppose I was expecting more humanoid aliens to be partaking in such an auction, but then again, there's no reason aliens would be humanoid, and you're always going to write the kinds of lewds you enjoy, as you should.

Still a lovely story though, of course.

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

You know, I was actually on the fence a bit about the tentacles - I wasn't sure if it might clash too much with the rest of the tone, but as you see, I decided to leave it in.

In this setting, aliens are (conveniently) made up of either sexy space-babes or horny/voracious monstrosities, with very few exceptions. But there's no rule against dominatrix-style space-babes getting in on future auctions, for the sake of variety.

Posted by VividLucidity 5 months ago Report

You know what, that's completely valid. It's good to see that there's some room for variety, so I'm definitely excited to see where it goes next!

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report

Oh yeah, variety is the spice of life, and with the infinite possibilities of alien life, I wouldn't wanna stay constrained to just tentacles. And now that you've got me thinking about it, hermaphroditic alien snake-women, (as a 'random' example) might be fittingly spicy auctioneers to purchase some earth-girl players in future chapters. ;3

Posted by VividLucidity 4 months ago Report

Funnily enough, I was thinking of mentioning that, of how you seemed to enjoy such hemaphrodite preds in your comment on my Santa Monica Diet post.

Posted by Henry567 5 months ago Report

Loved this! Really great concept cant wait to see what you do with this!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks! It was a lot of unusually lore-heavy work fort me, but I rather like the outcome myself. There will definitely be at least a few more installments at some point!

Posted by TheGreatest1986 5 months ago Report

You never disappoint Prinny! Personally, I've always found vore more satisfying when it has proper context, and the world building here is excellent. Not to mention the description of the agonizing fates these poor girls are subjected to.

Hopefully the women of the earth can step up their vore-ball game, otherwise they might see an ever-increasing portion of the human women being stuffed into slimy alien stomachs and slowly digested. (And nobody wants that, right?)

Overall, I really enjoyed the overall pacing of this story as well as the concept and I can't wait to see where you'll take it.

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you liked all the Vore Lore going on to set things up, as well as the inevitable vore-fest that ensued. :D

Posted by French_snack 5 months ago Report

I heartily approve of this development in Earth's history, and I'm looking forward to 2059. :D

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report

Agreed! A new era of prosperity and cultural exchange that everyone can appreciate! x3

Posted by blackpaw 5 months ago Report

Love the mix of fates, vore for one group, endless tentacle sex for the others.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the variety of perils the sexy girls of earth must face! x3