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Hey! I finally finished my story with the "Gaming Night" context that won the strawpoll almost 4 months ago! (Better late than never...)
"All tournaments, even between friends, are entitled to their prizes but in a vore world, those prizes can be more...meaty."
Don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !
Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc
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Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report
It's never as expected with you, hm?
I'll be honest, I liked the story, never read one from you I didn't like.
Though I assumed it would be people gaming for their own life. Which in my opinion is more fun as it draws you really into the game part of the story. You have one you want to see lose or win.
like the gym story you wrote.
Anyway, I kinda want to try out loser pizza and see if it comes with a delivery girl.
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
I'm not going to lie, it was my first idea but I never found a good way to write it in a way I liked.
I try to make sure that my stories are enjoyable to readers, but I also try to make sure that I enjoy writing them. (I've already abandoned stories that were 50% written because I didn't like writing them). And I found this backdrop of two friends in friendly adversity a nice one to explore for a casual vore story. ^^;
But I'm glad you like the story despite its unexpected context! :3
Posted by Kelly 1 year ago Report
Yes yes yes AWESOME ! between friends is always awesome to read !
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it ! :)
Posted by Miaozedong 1 year ago Report
First: I loved the story, you are pretty good, so keep going.
Second: The idea of a vore championship were the prey loses is very sexy, really. Please, you need to write more!
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
I have a "who loses is eaten" context that I'm keeping as a project and waiting to find inspiration for, so it'll happen sooner or later! :3