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When you're marked, it's easy to forget the simple pleasures of life. Usually, a hungry predator hunting you down is not the kind of thing that would help with that. Usually.

So, this was written months ago. It follows directly on the heels of the previous chapter. I'd hoped to upload them quickly so you could follow along easily, but it didn't work out that way. You might need to reread the last one (link below) to remember what's going on and who's who, but hopefully that isn't too big a bother.

I really liked the little trip down memory lane in this one. That dynamic between Jack and Fiona is just so interesting and enjoyable to me, it really fuels the series from the writing perspective. And having new faces to contrast that relationship against always highlights new angles. Speaking of relationship, what was with that moment Fiona had, huh? Honestly, if we'd planned this out well enough in advance we probably would have made this some kind of "special chapter" considering its number. But we have a story we want to tell, and I don't feel like screwing it around for jokes at this point. We'll fit the jokes in where they actually fit.

Anyway, how you guys enjoy this one, thank for sticking around and waiting for it, hopefully the next one is ready sooner.

Thanks as usual go to  x9comega for co-creating this series with me. If you need to refresh of the previous chapter, you can find the whole series here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

And if you want to chat with us and a bunch of other HNTBL fans, or just get the latest updates, you can hang out on the HNTBL Discord server (though comments are always appreciated as well).
https://discord.gg/3g8EmEjmnF

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alockwood1

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

Interesting.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

Well this is all very awkward.
The characters are like high schoolers right.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

Yes, that's right, high school.

VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 1 year ago Report

This was neat, curios to see what Sarabeth will plan next

Perodian

Posted by Perodian 1 year ago Report

It's inevitably going to be very awkward when Sarabeth has to explain that she didn't negotiate with her parents. In the meantime, Fiona can introduce Jack to more of her hunting habits and cause awkward situations in a different way.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 1 year ago Report

Mirror mirror on the wall, who is the yummiest of them all?

Well, Jack of course but besides that.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report

Ah, delightful! A nice turnabout, with Fi's jump scare, and the general playfulness was great. The "taste test" mystery continues, of course, but one day we'll know what it is..

I'm also starting to quite enjoy Chelsie as a character. Which is odd, because most of what she is right now is "unreadable but firm in her beliefs." I legitimately don't know what intentions, if any at all, she has towards Jack and I like it that way. At least for now.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

Yeah, she really was the breakout character from that pack. Lots of fun to write.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report

Such a nice surprise to wake up to.
While I'm willing to wait, I hope we don't have to wait so long very often :D

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

Same here.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

I hope so too ^^;

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

Interesting chapter, though it did have a few stuff to discuss, this chapter really does reinforce Jack and Fiona's relationship, plus have an outsiders perspective of them giving of how it looks and their reactions of such relationships.

Still, I sense a hidden story point in this chapter.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

I guess the only disappointment was that Jack and Fiona didn't kiss yet.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

I wonder about someone suggesting Fiona endoing Jack and providing the protection spells for that.

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 1 year ago Report

Not a viable option for numerous reasons.

aperson1234567890

Posted by aperson1234567890 1 year ago Report

Well, non-canon omakes are always a thing. Just saying...

1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 8 months ago Report

Ok this taste test tease is getting frustrating but in the best way.