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Have I seen your Girlfriend? (Story) By CoolKaios -- Report

So here's a short story biased on the Nimune pic  nalzindar

I wanted to give you the reader a feeling of being in this interaction.

As well as kind of elaborate the vibe of how I see Nimune's attitude and personality.

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Randomdude5

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

That is creative.

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 1 year ago Report

Thank you~

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

I love your story, it is both sweet, fun and shows that Nimune does have a very nice side despite being a predator. I hope to read more about her again soon : )

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 1 year ago Report

Im glad you enjoyed!
If anything I think you really captured her spirit in your picture :)

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Haha, poor 'original girlfriend' got NTR'ed AND digested. Tough luck, that is! xD

But yeah, this was a delightfully fun little tale. I love Nimune & her playfully whimsical, yet merciless attitude. Not to mention her ability to go translucent and show off her latest meal as they squirm about. I certainly hope she gets up to similar voracious shenanigans in the future! x3

Nalzindar's illustration is also fantastic. Really shows how both sexy and intimidating she is at once, just relaxing there full of hapless prey.

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 1 year ago Report

Thank you~
Im sure you can see your influences here.
I wanted to kind of make Nimune's perspective on eating folks to be 'unique'.

This can lead to her being very unpredictable. She might let you go or might scheme to eat whole groups of people it really depends how she rationalizes it lol

THEholySnail

Posted by THEholySnail 1 year ago Report

I wonder whether Nimmune's ability of transparency is more then just a visual transparency but also kind of related to sound and hearing aswell. Noone seemed to overhear Nimmune's conversation with the outside world from the inside, only once she cast the spell she was heard.

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 1 year ago Report

One of the reasons I had Nimune have big ears was so that she can communicate with those she eats.

To other people on the outside they would just hear muffled noises.

This isnt all sunshine and roses though. Nimune being able to hear her prey isn't always something she appreciates.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 9 months ago Report

Oh, if someone tries, will she spit out the rest of the girls?

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 9 months ago Report

It depends on the circumstances. Nimune eats for sustance more so than pleasure (though she does enjoy her meals). Plus shes pretty rational an empathetic.

So if you were clever and charismatic enough she might spit out a few of these girls as she only needs a human a week to survive~

Though she also might not be entirely happy to relinquish such a large meal either (bigger meal means more sustenance) so youd have to make a compelling argument.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 9 months ago Report

I see. Do you do RPs?

CoolKaios

Posted by CoolKaios 9 months ago Report

Im open to them. But not in these comment section lol. Shoot me a DM i guess~

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 9 months ago Report

OK. I sent you a PM.