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A small fic, purely about the end of the digestive process. Those that know me know that the concept of digestion and weight gain are by far my favorite parts of vore. Ambiguous pred was also a fun idea.
I wrote this in like an hour for practice.
Let me know what you think
The icon is official art from Nintendo.
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Posted by Draconatedz 1 year ago Report
Very sexy as always, but I will admit I find the ambiguous pred a bit confusing considering you bothered giving her dialogue at all. I think it would have been more effective if it was entirely from Tiki's perspective in the harmful stomach chambers from start to finish, giving the predator more of an air of mystery. Still, excellent worth here, short and oh so sweet.
Posted by TheN7Slayer 1 year ago Report
Thats fair. I could have spent a bit more time planning out what to write for the pred. I did want there to be monologue from the pred, but maybe that doesnt mesh well with the ambiguous pred.
This was piece that was basically written then posted. To fill out my quota of posting something every half a yearish or so.
Also because Tiki is hot.
Posted by TableManners 1 year ago Report
Agreed on the feedback on the pred - but this is a great story, particularly the pacing
Posted by TheN7Slayer 1 year ago Report
Appreciate the feedback!
Posted by Augustin 1 year ago Report
Oh, how the turntables. Great to see you posting again, and with such an excellent character. I think I would die of happiness if you ever did a Tiki version of Robin's Bad Luck.
Posted by TheN7Slayer 1 year ago Report
Maybe at some point. My will to write comes and goes. Especially big long fics like the RBL series. You have no idea how mamy wips I habe of just random vore fics lol.
So unlikely, but not impossible.
Posted by 101danmnations 1 year ago Report
Glad to see another story from you!
Posted by TheN7Slayer 1 year ago Report
Thank you :)