Posted by nephilim 1 year ago Report

I love love text message story telling and interludes. They're great to use

Posted by Evilean58 1 year ago Report

They were some of the last things I came up with when planning this comic and I'm glad I did. Really pushed the tone even darker with them.

Posted by KinoTheCat 1 year ago Report

If it helps for reassurance on the feeling of comics not being your strong suit, this whole comic set has been really great~ You've done a real good job with it.

Posted by Evilean58 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I appreciate it.

I feel like I'm okay at some of the storytelling stuff but I really feel at a loss with the technical and problem solving stuff when it comes to designing the comic itself. I wanna get more experience and a better understanding of comic language. Which, right now, isn't a lot since I don't really read comics. Not to mention that I have very little experience with inking and line art. But I'm glad enough is shining through that it's able to resonate with some people.

Posted by DEF-EAT 1 year ago Report

You say comics arent your strong suit.
But this comic is neat.Good job and keep it up!

Posted by Evilean58 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you like it

Posted by KharieTheGoddess 1 year ago Report

even if theyre not your strong suit this is great, hehe

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Wow so her friend knows she’s about to die , that’s a twist !
I bet she was essentially sacrificed or lured there to be diner lol

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Also I just wanna point out of takes DC comics years to tell a full story and days to finish a single issue . So….. you’re not worse than them XD

Posted by chefjellyguy 1 year ago Report

That's not her friend responding. The pred ate her friend in the past and used their phone to lure her here.

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Wait seriously O.O when did tht happen

Posted by chefjellyguy 1 year ago Report

It's implied by the boy being the one to respond to her text in this image, as shown by his gurgling gut being in-shot.

Posted by ClunkyGhost 1 year ago Report

this is such a lovely use of text messages,,,

Posted by Octonotrus 1 year ago Report

yes! another soul for my ever growing colec- WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHES NOT DEAD YET!?

Posted by HiddenBird 1 year ago Report

This comic is a certified banger, genuinely one of the best i’ve seen here. The pacing and the banter are really really good, so are the twists, especially if you aren’t privy to the pred being a pred.

Posted by ZRex030 1 year ago Report

noo mean to her