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Hullo! The second place poll winner, a piece I started with the intent of writing something short, about a shy girl that goes to a Halloween party and doesn't make it back out.
I was expecting to get this done a few days after my last story, given the length, but then I started playing Rimworld, got very addicted, and didn't get much writing done for a little while there... anyway, with this story, the experiment is temporarily done! I wanted to practice focusing on a project, since I was trying to do comms... and then I took comms in the middle of writing these winners... so yeah, turns out that keeping focused four stories in a row was... difficult, but hey, I did it, and I managed to almost entirely focus on said stories while I did! It just took me two months... oh, also I wanted to try doing a kind-of prey POV piece, so there's that done too.
Anyway, enjoy! Leave me a comment! Tell me what you liked, tell me what you hated, try to peer pressure me and insist I write a sequel to whatever your favorite story of mine was... whatever! I love getting favorited as much as the next guy, but a comment can really make my day.
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
this just screams highschool bullies/ popular kids lol
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Hurray! You're friends with a popular girl! Just, uh, don't pay attention to everyone nearby wincing knowingly when she invites you to a party...
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
In a world where murder via vore is legal, then some bullies would do it IMO.
Posted by FluffV 1 year ago Report
This was really, really good. Would love to see a sequel to this tbh
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the compliment :)
I admit I hadn't really thought about sequels, given I kinda killed off the main character of the story... I guess I'll see if anything comes to mind
Posted by FluffV 1 year ago Report
I was kind of thinking that you could continue with Jason and Amelia. They're such a cute couple ^^
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I like Halloween parties as a setting for a vore story. The party gives plenty of people that are there to have fun, and they could be drunk. The Halloween part means that monsters could dress up as humans, or humans could roleplay as monsters while eating other humans. A full belly could even be part of the costume.
Another thing that I like is how vore is normalized to the point that Jason and Amelia aren't worried about being prosecuted for Amanda's murder, but Amanda still is afraid of being eaten. I infer that Amelia invited Amanda, just so Jason could eat her. I like how Jason gives Amanda a sucker just before eating her.
The way Amelia reacts to finding out that Jason ate Mandy before she could feed her to him, makes me think that Amelia is a voraphile observer who loves to feed her pred boyfriend, and fuck him while the prey dies.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Halloween parties are indeed a great setting~ I mean, parties in general are fun, but Halloween and the costumes just adds extra flavor to the whole thing :)
Amanda's nervousness and fear was fun to write... though really she just shifted from a minor fear of being eaten to the terror of having been eaten and her imminent death
Yeah, Amelia was written with a sort of sadistic voraphile in mind... she loves killing people in her boyfriends' guts; including her boyfriends, if she finds a new one she likes, and also including enemies, random people, and her own friends, if she wants to add some special spice to the fun. She has several friends for this purpose, though few/none of them know their role in the friendship....