LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Indeed.

My bet if there were an alternative point of view. Or sequel would be more what it's like to assimilate, or absorb a soul from a witch viewpoint.

As Emily might have experience being absorbed, "digested" and buried within a witch's soul. But to a witch, that might be the most intimate part of the process.

And if they preserve the conciousness, instead of break them down into nourishment. By memories and emotions...

Probably Cavalla "patting" Emily, her hunting sex. On how she's going to help her adopt stray witches, and absorb more beautiful souls that will be a part of their own being.

acrylic - 1 year ago

I like that interpretation.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

In a way, in spite of how cruel it could be.

Emily is lucky to be a "shadow", or a conscious part of the predatory witch that absorbed her. As a "persona", to harvest more power from in maternal hunger...

Or at least, more fortunate than all the witches buried deep inside her psyche, who are nothing more than "batteries" to her "true" self, or host witch.

After all. Emily is not just a preyed on victim. But a maternal organ of the very witch who absorbed her soul. And is lucky to be treated as a forever tormented "familiar", to the "mother" she cannot forget, nor resist the instinct of...

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Alternatively. For all I know, Emily hijacked her devourer from within. But that devourer is forever a part of Emily, within "her". And what will she has is also her predators.

acrylic - 1 year ago

Not many people can truly escape from the bond.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

In a way, I have to reread this story. But from what I glanced so far...

Poor Emily. Even if she was "rescued", she is forever bound to her mother witch. As a sapient uterus, craving for more souls to hunt.

acrylic - 1 year ago

Once you reach your place, you will realize that all your will to move and slither deeper was a mere part of her body's will, because you can no more move anymore, but only rest in your seat tight.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

And the most horrifying thing is, past the cervix. IF there is a cervix.

Is that pred's vagina, or womb is an endless tunnel. Ultimately leading to the origin of life, where one cannot escape from, once buried that deep.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Another bullshit thought with Kaguya, if you think of it in a certain point of view...

She could hold more than a million, even a billion, or even a trillions of eggs. And still not be 'overful', because her concept/body is that of 'eternity'.

Or in another maternal 'loving' line. In before if in an alternative touhou world/universe/timeline...

Kaguya unbirthed the moon. Or, an Earth. And "purified" it for the Lunarians by imposing the concept of 'eternity' within the entire planet...

But it's protected/saved from the Lunarians, by being buried within her maternal being. Safe, inside an ovum, as everything regresses to their primordial origin for eternity.

Probably means her ovum would get a nice, steady stream of heat. And likely explode with gaining more babies, as 'time' is regressed, and the entire history is archived within her sex.

For all eternity...

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Gotta love how the cervix looks like another eye, there. ;)

acrylic - 1 year ago

Me too.
I do not like digestion but I like it when it is a method of purifying a body into a spiritual thing.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

My only 'snipe' is, my view on cum digestion is it 'expels' the soul, but giving it a chance to fertilize new life, if it was implanted within another ovum.

Past that... Definately getting more ideas for this. So don't mind if I archive this for a future Yuugi UB story. When stars align, at Reimu & Marisa's game over expense~

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Gotta love how this image is giving me more ideas, for a "Yuugi Muscle Womb" unbirth. And even the concept of uterine resorption, as a thing.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

No doubt, the only people she would consider unbirthing are those that give her enough of a challenge, as to make her bloodlust turn maternal.

Then she might fight "serious", for the right to ingest their existence into her own maternal instinct".

Might be followed by taunting her preys related friends into a fight, just to feel her newest baby regress faster, while fulfilling her bloodlust.

acrylic - 1 year ago

Makes sense.

Though there are some more inside her body, she is not that a serial unbirther.
She has her own rules whom to unbirth.
In most of the case, she would just cut them as a swordman before an unbirther.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Hm, maybe all that fighting accelerated her maternal regression, with all that adrenaline.

Also, whose to say that was the only person unbirthed?

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Is this the real life, is this just fantasy? Caught in a labour, no escape from reality~

Gotta love your art, egg storage most of all~

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Again, no problem.

Especially on your art, involving ovaries~ :)

acrylic - 1 year ago

Thank you Lemonbarb

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

As much as your art ^.^

acrylic - 1 year ago

I like that interpretation.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

This is probably her death curse at play here,

Boundary between Life and Death wise, to an endless butterfly that inflicts mortality upon those she gazes at?

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Indeed I have~

to the point, [url=https://aryion.com/g4/view/897366]that I have[/url] written a [url=https://aryion.com/g4/view/898076]handful of sequels[/url], in my gallery~.

I'd say more. But let's say I've also archived this story, and wish for a source of the thumbnail to complete the "wish I could shift through your deletion bin for more content" edition.

Joking. Still, found a funny little trick, I may as well PM you over. If memory on Eka's Portal is forever in private servers?

acrylic - 1 year ago

Indeed.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

For heck. Did some speculated, expanded lore down below. Or at least, my loose take on it? Lack of "real" names for First-to-Third is due to the passage of time, turning them into being a 'part' of FLANDRE herself.

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"First" (Medieval era?) "Friend & Imagination",
The 'first' she wanted so badly, she absorbed not just their blood, but 'soul' by accident.
>The "most" Flandre by now, by far. Combatative personality wise?

"Second" (Victorian era?) "Motherly Family"
A "Wet Nurse" Flandre would have ate. But loved so much, she 'crushed' her into her sex.
>Became Flandre's "Maternal" instinct. More accepting of her lust... Yet is also, selective.

"Third" (Pre-Gensokyo time?) "Internal Knowledge"
Maybe a previous vampire slayer that got too cocky, she got absorbed by accident.
>Is now in 'tune' with Flandre's "subconcious" and memories. "Hunter Librarian" wise, that's now Flandre, remembering target's worth fighting... Or even adopting, at it's finest.

"Fourth" (Marisa Kirisame), "Precious Heart"
The newest 'adoption' of Flandre, and one that took the longest to process. She's still Marisa... But for how long, until her thoughts become 'one' with Flandre forever.
>Is still struggling over feeling herself being FLANDRE, over "Marisa". Yet is one that's most 'concious' within Flandre's psychotic, pandemonian psyche. Almost as if the fate that suffered the free in time, Flandre doesn't want to bleed into, with her "Precious Thing" of Marisa.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Gotta love the take, on how this could be a Marisa, once she's 'mind fucked' into becoming more "like" Flandre herself. After say, "a decade" perhaps?

Even if to be loosely frank, she 'might' cling to the name Marisa... Even if "Sis" is making her feel more a 'part' of her, under the line of "Love & Affection".

IE: The "Flandre's LOVE Sign: Master Spark" of the lot... And to the point everything Flandre Loves? (Battle, conflict. Entertainment), "Marisa" feels in doves. ;)

acrylic - 1 year ago

I remember the series.
But still, there are only few Yukari UB in our world.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

Think saintheartwing did a trilogy on her already. But hey, who knows with gap comparisons?

acrylic - 1 year ago

I hope someone writes Yukari UB too someday.

LemonBarb - 1 year ago

I love the concept of soul unbirth, turned into womb/ovary entombment.

Maybe if "James" is lucky, Yuyuko might birth him out as a daughter. But in practice, when what we 'know' of Gensokyo is all girls girls girls...

It'd take a Yukari tier of excuses, to even get out of a maidenly cussion. If nothing else, at least he's in a safer place, inside Yuyuko. Than a more cruel youkai.

acrylic - 2 years ago

Your opinion is only very correct and appropriate because I did not imply or explain anything about this story.

In this world, unbirth does not always guarantee safety to the predator.
Preys of course lose their freedom, but also predators risk danger when they unbirth a prey.
It can even risk their life, or bring disadvantage to theri uterus, health, physical/mental status.

So unbirth is only processed under certainty that the prey is only helpful to the pred, 'but this is not always perfect'.

Therefore, the talent of unbirthing in this world does not always mean unbirthing skills.
It means the predator's natural 'sense' of distinguishing their prey.

In our real life, we often say words such as 'he was born with artistic sense', 'she was given talents in sports' etc.

Predators with given sense of choosing their prey will live long with number of preys, and with rotten taste, they will risk their life at the end with one or two tries.
It is no wonder that most women in the world do not even try unbirthing because it will mostly bring danger.

The heroine in this story is also a 'born' unbirther.
She instinctively knows which one is a poison and which one is a strawberry.
But she never felt a boy that gave her this sense of desire and sense of 'certainty'.
This kind of match is historical, and mythical.

This is why she has been chasing the boy forever, and the boy could realize that this woman is the doom of his life.


So the answer is;
No, not every preys are well synchronized like the boy in this story.


The blissful scene the boy is experiencing is not a 'gift from her' nor 'intentional aftermath of her womb'.
It is a natural process.

We often say such expression, 'the moment I saw the scene, I felt the greatest awe arising from my inside.'
We all know this is true without actually experiencing a shocking awe.
But 'where does this awe come from?'.

This story tell us.

There is some kind of 'instinctive assumption' inside us that initiates awe/greatness/bliss/etc when the condition is met.

What he saw is not a real world, but nor dream world.
It is an expression or a metaphor that his ego is experiencing.

For the boy, inside her pussy was his condition after all, sadly.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Been meaning to write a review/compliment for this story for awhile.

All I'd say is, I guess the unbirther treated her unbirthed victims, as more people to synchronise with. Of which, being 'one' with her is the greatest bliss, one could ever get, after being unbirthed by her.

skorm - 2 years ago

You could really go for a hell of a plot twist with that , or a setting that natural procreation is just irrelevant in a universe that deems the prior to inefficient or timely. as for a experienced captor that does some what call into question further motives of a predator or captor , as for staying conscious I feel like in many ways that be almost virtually impossible there’s no light no way to tell time and even time slow or not past that point would become … so warped and convoluted but I do see multiple twists of how horrific it could be if by some feat you retain your sense of self I don’t know how it be possible in the embryonic stage.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

And no doubt if identified as awake, even if stuck in some material Dreamland. Your very sense of self could be adjusted, warped or buried as the preys host sees fit. Though I'd expect this to be easier for the pred to do, the further regressed their prey are.

Inversely related, if even 'reincarnated' or reborn. I'd argue the difference of DNA between the pred and prey becomes less of a gap, the further regressed the prey is.

As in, the worst case with a fetus or embryo, is a 50/50 split if infused with their predators egg. And that might also come with being hijacked/blended with a possible ego, previously preserved within the ovum.

If inside the ovarian state. Then ones DNA would eventually, become 100% their host. And all the biological influence that'd follow. Even picking up traits and personality quirks from their new mother over time, perchance?

acrylic - 2 years ago

Because the time moves too slowly, the 'consciousness' are sometimes altered and the prey occassionally stay 'conscious' even after they are past the fetus stage.
But this does not mean that you can communicate with your captor.
Of course, skilled and experienced captors might recognize your status if you are awake though.

acrylic - 2 years ago

A: It can vary.
Yes you can be let out.
Some predators do multiple unbirthing for efficiency. But if they think that they unbirthed too much, they might birth one or two for convenience of smaller belly.

B: Not every embryo are further regressed, instead some are 'buried' within the uterine wall. It is not known why the predator does not regress the prey further, but we can guess that it gives them more 'fulfilling' because the prey still has its 'mass' as an embryo than an egg.
It is also reported that preds who have multiple preys buried within their womb look more youthful.
The only downside of this action is that the pred will not gain complete control of the prey unless they are within the ovaries.

C: Correct.


Biology: Elves, succubus, witches, alchemist and etc.
There's even a normal human who has lived a long life by draining the life energy of living human that are now batteries within her belly.

skorm - 2 years ago

I’d like to think , this could be a interesting scenario for a sci-fi , futuristic style set up where are life spans are soooo much longer and our aging is so slowed down that to us 30 years would be a blink of a eye this is really food for thought using a time sink. Or as lemon said elves make sense or more fantastical beings that are extremely long lived , if anything this variation is a real investment but it’s none the less I think fascinating I mean can you imagine the preds perspective ?
Heck I think the fetus stage is I can’t help But wonder would the mind still be intact in a form of memories as before? This while it was short really makes you weigh the scales differently

acrylic - 2 years ago

Yeah I can easily imagine a story themed “a seed’s dream”

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

One more stray thought, in relation to my unbirth story involving Yuuka. Nominally, she'd have just crushed any 'annoyance', prey wise. If going by say, Youkai logic. "Genocide is a game" wise and all.

Whatever fate befell Marisa to be entombed within Yuuka's maidenly organ, is less a 'mercy', more a well. 'Privilage', to Yuuka's own, predatory desire.

End game being, she's stuck at the flower maiden's mercy, for the rest of her long-lived life. And it'd be on a whim, if she'd think of letting a "flowered" Marisa bloom, or preserved deep within her sex.

acrylic - 2 years ago

Exactly.
Yuuka is dominating but not maternal, at least to her preys.
Yuuka clearly distinguishes whether one is her baby or her trophy, and even if she still has maternal feeling hidden inside her, she is not that impulsive enough to be overwhelm by that kind of feeling.
Sorry for Marisa. She is certainly in a safe and warm place, but that warmth and security is not toward Marisa.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

In all due respect. That next time might be sooner than you think, ohoho~

... But alas. I'd probably imagine Alice going full Danmaku duel/angry over Yuuka, keeping Marisa inside her 'maidenly chamber', or 'seed bank' forever. With no interest in letting her out, or even "sprout". :)

acrylic - 2 years ago

Maybe I might have drawn her face in the next page where Marisa only remains as a lonely seed deeper inside her, so Yuuka is finally satisfied,, if I drew it.
I will be looking forward to see your next writing too.

acrylic - 1 year ago

Thank you for the comment

skorm - 2 years ago

We continue to love, fail, depress, comeback and success while we adapt to the world and it carves our inner idol to fit into reality.

One who continues to meet many people wanting that they will finally meet the real love, but fails.
One who does not accept real love, and just wait for the true love to come to them while stuckin inside.
Both are immature fundamentally. Deep right there

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

No problem. That's why the magical power of the EDIT button comes in handy. ;) :)

acrylic - 2 years ago

I just realized that the writing was cut off.
This sometimes happens when I write on my phone.

Thank you for the comment.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Surprisingly philosophical. So I'll throw in my thoughts on what's written in the description up above. :)

First part, nice thoughts on romance, alongside concerns on the spiral of extortion.

Then, comes the fetish on Unbirth.

And an interesting thoughts on the concepts of masculanity, and femininity. And how to a point, one can struggle hard if their being unbirthed. But when it becomes inevitable, power imbalance in being dominated by not just a fantasy woman, but soon-to-be mother, or carer. That's when resistance would give way.

Part of the description got cut of, but I can get the end part from within the image text-description, once the unbirth process has been fully realised. Especially once hormones from their mother's womb, kicks in. More so, when the cervix is fully sealed shut, barring attempts to birth out bar a more invasive surgery.

That, and how once you're fully tucked inside a womb. Your world slowly becomes 'one' with the female woman you're inside. They become your world, or rather. You become enveloped by their own world, and body.

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That said, nice philosophy. And an equally nice unbirth sketch on top. :)

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Nah, have yet to make an RP character myself. Probably might do a succubus at a stretch, but past that. More likely to GM an interactive story or quest, more than anything.

acrylic - 2 years ago

Do you have your own UB involving characters in the roleplay profiles too?

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Recalled seeing her on the roleplay profiles/character sheets ages back, and loved her then, as I do now.

If anything, I'd probably imagine at a stretch; what would it take for a special soul to be 'with' her immortal/eternal daughter. But odds are it'd probably lead to said soul being stored/entrapped within Dollka for eternity, no doubt.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Assuming, a fourth option in fully "integrating" their conciousness, until there's literally zero difference to them, could also be considered. As much as the equal possibility of being able to 'reverse-engineer' that process, to trap more souls 'deep' inside them, for a hard to manage/develop power boost.

Or, later on passing those same souls down, to their next child, or heir being another thought. Or heck, reincarnating that exact soul to be another Baphomet, like them. And lastly, assuming they don't gestate their conciousness for months, years or decades before eventually developing their child's body, in case of a "New Baphomet child".

acrylic - 2 years ago

That is possible.
Also the mother Baphomet can allocate certain amount of souls as a base material of the future Baphomet child.
These souls form the 'ancient follicles' within the Baphomet.
So every children that the Baphomet will bear in the future are genetically affected by these souls.
Therefore, these primary follicles souls are usually selected by their 'appearance, intelligence, physical ability' in hoping that their children will pass down high-graded genes.
These follicled souls are usually hibernating or 'so deeply' hidden within the ovaries.
It is a tradition that the mother Baphomet does not explain about these follicles, so the newborn Baphomet lives their life unrecognizing that there are base good graded souls that are trapped within her.
Some Baphomets who succeeded in training themselves with stronger power and well-skilled control of their organ later realizes that they had these selected souls since she was born.
Whether they decide to befirend these souls, continue to trap them and silence their voice, or even give them second chance of life(bearing that it will weaken themselves) is upon their personality.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

I'm guessing once a soul has been gestated/stored within the Baphomet's ovum, they're trapped within her for eternity. Unless at a 'stretch', reborn as a new Baphomet, alongside a gestalt of souls?

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

A bit of an added PS, but I for one; also love the vagina pose, with how it's clamped shut on the floor. :)

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

In which case, I'm probably bet she thinks she's enjoying "melting" her executed prisoners via vore, like icicles. Except it ends up being more regression based, to her pleasure.

And no doubt, if she does realise she's unbirthing. Maybe be annoyed, or take malice on how they'd be bound within her for eternity.

acrylic - 2 years ago

There is a reason she is doing this.
Either vore or unbirth are not common in her universe.
She does not even know that she is doing unbirthing.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

No doubt she's gaining power, the more victims that are a permament part of her predatory womb.

622 - 2 years ago

Little do we know this was set up by the former wife now unborn fetus and the girl next door now new wife to give the former wife now unborn fetus a new life and give the girl next door now new wife a daughter and make the man shes had a crush on since she was a little girl her husband and father of all the children they will have which I'm sure that will be every woman around he know and around him

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

If a sequel does get done, I'd probably bet the 'new wifes' response would be suitably Tsundere, no matter what she does next.

acrylic - 2 years ago

Don't worry, they did not even marry yet.
Let's see what happened to him in the sequel, if I do.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Honestly, I'd be passively worried for the girl next door if her new husband figured out what she did to his wife. And didn't took offense, but led to her unbirthing everyone else, to having her reproductive organs being worshipped.

For all I know. It could lead to maybe, her unbirthing her husband. While promising that she'll fill herself with all the people he wanted her to be 'one' with, though.

Or. Just her unbirthing said husband every night, so he'd have no chance of leaving her.

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

Ive already got some ideas, if you ever open commissions id love to work on them with either of you

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Same. Just having notes right now, and checking them twice once I'm done with a few backlog projects of mine.

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

XD the feeling is mutual :)

acrylic - 2 years ago

Glad to hear the conversation.
I will be expecting some nice works from you two :)

elliotalien08 - 2 years ago

Any Unbirth and age regression story is good, one that uses such an unused character!?? Sign me up!

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Honestly, I didn't knew at all until you wrote that fanfic. Then I went all ~hue over her egg-like nature being, inspiring.

Imagine being trapped in her body. You 'could' break out of 'her/you'. But her skin is as hard as a shell. And the more you're stuck inside her, the less you're able to move. Until your entire being/self is 'yolk' with her own instincts/body.

If anything. I'd bet in an evolutionary standpoint? She's intentionally staying as an 'egg', because an egg can always accept (absorb) more DNA as needed.

I'd ramble more, but hey. "Hyper Egg Pred" is an interesting concept, for unbirth by birb or other hue. :)

acrylic - 2 years ago

I am happy that you were inspired by the story.
By the way, did you know the original manga?
I ask because you seem to know that Kuusetsu's primitive form is an egg.

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Short term; thanks for giving me a keyword to a magical realm. Of an "egg predator?"

That said, nice writing practice. Though honestly, it's just giving me vague idaes on if/when I ever, do some "RPG Pals" take on some sort of "Birb Pred"? :)

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

Honestly, my bet if there's ever a part 2. Is probably some tantric or hermetic ritual. Whilst the 'fresh' eggs realise in horror, that there's over say, 'hundreds? Thousands?' Of prisoners eternally stuck, as nothing more than say; "Mana batteries"?

acrylic - 2 years ago

I don’t have a plan to continue this as a series for now.
But thank you for the comment.

CPSS2050 - 2 years ago

You should make a part two

LemonBarb - 2 years ago

I'm guessing the secret of "Unbirth", is related to the "devourers" in secrecy. My bet is probably either 'black ops' for execution or 'silencing'. Or possibly to 'add' to their own talent, by stealing from the potential of others, like 'batteries' once stored/trapped in the ovum? :)

CopperRobot - 2 years ago

I like this concept!

Moxxieasslover - 3 years ago

Imma dive in :D

LemonBarb - 3 years ago

Honestly, in the lens of 'statistical growth'. Can't wait to imagine if/when Shana unbirths/regresses some key/vital monsters, like say; a Succubus? Or what her 'skill set/strength' would be when her ovary count reaches the hundreds, even thousands of 'adventurers'.

... Or heck, ends up with 'blessed' knights that deliver sacrifices, to be given sanctuary/bliss. :)

empatheticapathy - 3 years ago

I like that part of the set-up here is she gains the abilities of whoever she unbirths.

LemonBarb - 3 years ago

I get that occasionally/all the time. Just something I'm always mindful when it comes to future uploads, story wise.

That said, glad you enjoy my stories in general, as well. :)

acrylic - 3 years ago

Thank you LemonBarb for your advice, and also thank you for uploading nice works.
I am a fan of your works.

I did spacings but they all disappeared when I saved the file in .doc and uploaded it :(

acrylic - 3 years ago

Thank you for your guide :)

acrylic - 3 years ago

Thank you for the guide.

LemonBarb - 3 years ago

In/out of bias, I missed a lot of your written/drawn content that's no longer there. But that said, here's my thoughts on this lovely piece.

Visually/at a stretch. The only caveat I'd have to say is mild formatting, more than grammar (in a sense of spacing could have made it look better on reading here). Wordplay's nice other than that. :)