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Introducing a new character...
Felarya is Karbo's creation, as are all non-human species in this story, and as is Crisis (who appears here briefly). All other characters are my own.
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Posted by atak 16 years ago Report
^^ Fun story, I do like it! That tom-thumb was lucky to have been devoured by Elaya, to have gotten to be her food and to digest in her stomach! Mild shame he didn't get to chat with her a lil while, but such is the fate of food! I do hope he enjoyed his time inside of her stomach.
I do wonder what would ever persuade her to eat her fellow humans?
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Thanks!
She wouldn't eat a human. Like most Felaryans, she doesn't eat members of her own species. She would see that as "wrong".
Posted by Jacquelope 16 years ago Report
I found it funny that Ethil was told early on that he might learn something.
What Ethil should have learned was when he is asked “Is there a reason why I shouldn't eat you?” that this was a good time to learn NOT to be silent.
Felarya... where the smart live just a little bit longer.
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
His mind just didn't kick in fast enough with a smart reply. What he should have learnt *in advance* is what to say in such circumstances.
Unfortunately for him, he won't be able to learn from this mistake... On the positive side, at least Elaya enjoyed him!
Posted by Karbo 16 years ago Report
Excellent character once again ! Complex, orginal, and of course her story is magnificiently told ;)
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Thanks! :) I'll try to use her again some day.