Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report

Another excellent chapter ! ^_^
Great character development and great vore scene ! But the thing that stand out the most to me was this confrontation between Rajan and Palaye. Intense moment ! :)

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you! :)

Their confrontation was interesting to write. When I started writing, I wasn't actually sure yet how it was going to end. I changed my mind several times; the scene basically led me along and wrote itself, as the characters reacted to each other. Then I looked back at their earlier, friendly behaviour towards each other, and I found it rather interesting how it had tipped into a confrontation.

So I'm glad that scene stood out. :D

Rajan being the pilot and the "leader", I felt it was time to focus a chapter on him and develop him a bit. The next chapter, of course, will be about someone else.

As always, thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

Very fun story as always. I am very curious how Milly and her "new friend" are going to get along... I am very VERY curious how Milly would ever react to willing prey, especially one she started talking to after she'd already eaten her fill of other people. I wonder, if she'd be willing to play with her food, to tease it and enjoy it a while; before she lets it willingly give up it's life for her hungry belly?
I'd hope she would REALLY enjoy her willing food, and just perhaps, even end up really becoming friends with it, against all odds!

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks. Milly's not going to find any willing prey here, though.

Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

That's a shame, but one can hope for her! ^^

Posted by Tsavo 15 years ago Report

Phew, the scene between Palaye and Rajan was a bit creepy. Excellently written.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you! "Creepy" is an interesting way to put it... :) As I mentioned above, I wasn't sure at first where I was going to go with that scene, but I'm rather pleased with how it turned out. Glad you liked it.

Posted by Tsavo 15 years ago Report

I only say that because karbo already used intense and I don't like repeating words.

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

jaime pas le prêtre ^^ jespere tu vas le faire mourir :O(ou digérer ^^) moi quand je dis a quelqun que je suis athée et quil me répond que je vais aller en enfer, jsuis tellement frustrée la!! ça me emt hors de moi grrXD

bonne histoire ;P

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Merci. Tout ce que je peux dire, c'est qu'on reverra le prêtre plusieurs fois.

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

awww :(

Posted by oishi1 13 years ago Report

the giantess and naga attack was very fun. I like the dissonance between the way they see it and the way the humans view the same situation. Similarly the shock Rajan had that Palaye ate sentient beings shows how different the two worlds actually are.

Posted by auric 4 years ago Report

"Her stomach now held ten wriggling, struggling humans."

This continuity turned me onto giantess vore to a certain degree whereas I'm normally same-size to the max -- but exclusively french's stories do it for me.

Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report

Thanks! That's a nice compliment, and I'm glad I've been able to help you experience that type of pleasure. :D