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Just a short one. I got this idea from the "predator trinity" on the wiki (http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Religions#The_predator_trinity). I was probably inpired, also, by one of Angel2012's pictures (http://angel2012.deviantart.com/art/Subetas-Voracious-Ecstasy-124191619).
Felarya, of course, is Karbo's. All characters are my own.
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Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report
Hehe great idea to put the two together ! Somehow it works very well XD
Only ( very ) slight remark is I thought you could have put some additionnal victims before Larin, to better emphatize that Alitan really swallow " a la chaine" XP
Posted by Tsavo 15 years ago Report
Very nice story. Always interesting to learn more about Felarya. I'm in agreeance with Karbo as well. :D
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Heh. Thank you both. Yes, I suppose I should have shown more people disappearing into her mouth... ;) Perhaps I kept it too implicit.
Posted by atak 15 years ago Report
Murrr, very wonderful story indeed. I did love how that blonde haired fairy told her captives to shush with such a sweet, playful giggle... And I did also love how hungry, sweet, and playful the neko girl was when she was eating.
I really liked, that all of the predatoresses weren't monsters, they were sweet, friendly, nice 'girls', who just happened to eat people to satisfy their greedy, merciless appetites! I really loved that...
Personally, if I were one of those nekos captured, I'd MUCH rather be eaten by one of the other fairies, digested much more alone inside of her sweet belly... Almost a shame that soooo many nekos were forced to digest in that one belly. But it was still a very fun story. I looooved how uncaring they all were, treating their prey like mere food; even though it could clearly talk and converse with them, still mere food for them to eat and digest without care!
One of my more favorite stories of yours, I'd say, but you have quite a few good ones!
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thank you! Of course, those inside Alitan were digested for a greater purpose. ;)
Posted by atak 15 years ago Report
True, but it's no better purpose than being food for a very fun, gorgeous, sweet, playful, teasing, hungry girl!
Murrr, and more fun, getting to savor more of her insides, and be more alone as I digest like the food I am!