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Another brief scene in the lives of Felaryans.
I hope I've got Katrika right... I was a bit uncertain, since I was placing her in a situation that I've never really seen her in.
Vuni's previous encounter with Katrika can be found here:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=165911
Felarya belongs to Karbo. Katrika is Zoekin's. Anna (mentioned but not seen) is Karbo's. All other characters are my own.
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Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report
Ohh another great story ! Extremely intense !
Seeing you don't have too much qualm about killing characters, I was pretty uneasy about Vuni's fate. And this is one o the big strenght of your story-telling, to create characters the reader care about ! ^_^
And I am not Ktrika's creator of course, but i think you captured her well here :)
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
I seem to be playing around with my characters' emotions, don't I? Maybe, some day, I should write a story where nothing bad happens to anyone. :p Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it, and that I'm able to write characters you care about. That's really what I was trying to do: make readers care about what happened to them. So thanks. :)
Maybe Vuni will meet Katrika again. If they meet for a third time, I think there's a strong likelyhood Vuni will end up in Katrika's stomach at last. After all, I don't think Katrika would want to let her go *three times*. Or would Vuni be extremely lucky? We'll see what happens. ;)
Posted by oldman40k2003 15 years ago Report
I think the obvious solution for Vuni is to stay pregnant all the time. Sure, it might be a big hassle, but she'd be safe from at least Katrika.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
:lol: I suppose staying alive would be worth it. She'd soon be utterly exhausted, though. ;)
Posted by Tsavo 15 years ago Report
More excellence from French_snack. No surprise here. =D
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)