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Felarya is Karbo's creation, as are the non-human species in this story. All characters are my own.
You may remember Shelny and Enita from a previous story.
Chapter 8 is here:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=174332 .
Chapter 10 is here: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=187899 .
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Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report
bravo excellente histoire comme toujours ^^
meme si je dois admettre que ca marrive souvent de ne pas reconnaitre tel ou tel personnage car il y en a beaucoup ^^"
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Merci! Oui, c'est vrai qu'il y en a pas mal...
Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report
Un autre très bon chapitre ^_^
Beau boulot sur la rencontre avec la slug girl géante et les questions inévitables sur Palaye. Et vraiment bien joué sur la rencontre Gwynn / Shelny. Le moment ou elle fait semblant de manger Gwynn est saisisant. Et j'aime beaucoup le duo qu'elle forme avec la fée XD
Juste une petite erreur là : “She is indeed a fairy. Enita, this is Gwynn. I rescued her from a dryad.†^^
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Ah, en effet. Bien vu.
Et merci; content que ça t'ait plu. J'avais envie depuis un certain temps de ré-utiliser Shelny et Enita, et le contexte s'y prêtait.
Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report
tout à fait ! Je les avais bien repéré ces deux là après l'histoire de Ranilla, j'ai tout de suite percuté quand j'ai revu la petite fée "cheerfuly carnivorous" :P
Posted by oishi1 13 years ago Report
I forgot that Majed spoke Primarily Arabic and French and was wondering why you staggered his words, then I realized he was supposed to be speaking English at that part. I still don't know what language is standard in Felarya. It kind of feels like one of those old sci-fi shows where every person on every planet speaks English for no reason.
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
The official answer, from the Felarya wiki, is that some form of magic enables people to understand one another. But in this story it felt more natural for me to show humans trying to communicate, with occasional difficulty, in one another's language.
Posted by oishi1 13 years ago Report
I think that is better too. It adds layers to the story and helps build tension.