Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report

Oh, my. This is once again written so eloquently. Your dialog is excellent. I'm in class, later this night I will read more.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you! I was uncertain, actually, whether I was rushing it, or on the contrary stretching it out too much, or whether it was reasonably balanced.

Posted by Jacquelope 15 years ago Report

This doesn't feel rushed. It feels properly paced. Vuni sounds like she's going to grow up to be human friendly, like Rin, right?

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks. Well, unlike Rin, Vuni is too small to eat humans, so she was merely indifferent to them in Felarya. But yes, if she ever does get home, she would probably take more of a friendly interest in them now.

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

super booooooooooooooon :D!!!

mais fais en pas comme une suite de 12 parties sil te plait O-o (lattente serait légerement trop longue ^^;) mais ton histoire est interessant! :D jsuis impatiente de voir ta prochaine histoire ^^

xoxoxo

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Merci! (Et non, il n'y aura pas 12 parties. :p)