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Rescued from near death by an empire of woman-abusing cultists, ten girls are locked into a treasure room for the guardian dragon to eat and otherwise enjoy. He has tormented and devoured countless thousands of women over the decades... why would these ten end up any differently?
Hard Vore, cooking, soft vore, crushing, gang rape, nudity, anal insertion, cock vore, impalement, scrotal insertion, lots and lots of female abuse.
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Posted by FyrreTail 14 years ago Report
i feel bad for the dragon, now dont go saying hes a evil dragon, he eats humans, he deserved to die, i read the story thinking the dragon would be full and the winner in then end, shame i was wrong :<
highly unlucky and personally stupid (no offense to you, just the whole enchanted blades just falling over him like that) way for that sexy dragon to go :<.. if it wasnt for the upsetting turn of events, defiantly would be a story id keep and read
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
*shrug* Don't take it personally. Dragons don't always win. ;)
Don't worry, they'll replace him as they would any pet and they'll be back to feeding their new dragon 20 girls a day before you know it. :D
Posted by Houyo 14 years ago Report
Unlike FyrreTail, I was personally rooting for the girls the whole time and hoping that atleast Rena would survive. And lukcy me, she did. :P Very badass.
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
*grin*
Glad you enjoyed.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
I was hoping the dragon decided to add Rena to his horde.
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
oo VERY nice
Pros:
great descriptions
awesome pred
invention of new vore
anal vore
Cons:
too big for my tastes
again my tastes called for a herm and unbirth
5/5 story, thank you very much
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Yeah, it got way too long. But I have to say Herms and UB aren't likely to be common themes in my work anytime soon. ;D
...not saying impossible. Just not commonly. :D
Thank you!
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
yeah I thought as much, still, your work is great
P.S I meant the dragon was too big, not the story
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Oh! Whoops, heh heh.
Well, I was going with "very big, very bestial."
Thanks!
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Ah, Kabe, man, I done went and read. You shoulda added, "implied scat". OMFG. Good stuff. And a woman survived and WON, too. *wipes brow*
You managed to put another unique twist on things. 5/5 as usual!
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Implied scat? Unless you're referring to the manure pile in the far corner of the huge chamber... I personally think the "Anal Insertion" tag is pretty accurate. I see I forgot to add "farting" to my tags here though.
I dunno, but to me "scat" means actual shit-play, and not once is there any. But I guess what happens to that first blonde can be considered such If you wish to be picky. ;)
Thanks for having the courage to read. After writing it I re-read it and went "damn. No one will want to read this."
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Ah, yes, what is defined as scat. I see your point and will not begrudge you your own standards. I wish there was a way to warn the reader "hey, this is what becomes of the characters that the dragon eats, and I will bring it up, so bring your brain bleach!" :D
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Ahh, I gotcha. You refer to the fact that the manure in the far corner is, after all, the remains of his former victims. You have a valid point sir.
In effect, best to over-tag as opposed to under-tag.
Posted by FyrreTail 14 years ago Report
on this note itd be really nice if it was better known the dragon would loose, i like dragon preds as my previous statement implies the death of dragon with some enchanted blades from above ruined it for me, and you know, scene in your art the female/humans always seems to be on the loosing end, was thinking why would this be any different? :) i really dont think dragons are dim to just leave things that could kill them laying around thats for sure
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Everyone has a different take on dragons; every story has a different dragon. If you read "Smuggler's Fun" you know the dragon in that one is smart; in this story I illustrated a more bestial dragon, that's all. Less intelligent, more animalistic, for all that he was cunning anyway. Yes, for the purposes of this story, the dragon in this one was stupid. In "Smuggler's Fun" the dragon, I daresay, was smarter than his rider.
You DO have a point on my ladies don't usually survive, though. ;)
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Aw c'mon, really, let a writer do a little variety once in a while, eh? I mean, the dragon did swallow two women ALIVE. Screaming, no less! Kabe simply took a scene we normally expect to end in that exact way, the way he normally does things, but this time he simply subverted it by giving us the opposite ending. Sometimes the dragon wins, sometimes the dragon doesn't win. It's life. It sucks and then someone dies, ya know.
Posted by Apostasy 14 years ago Report
nice
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed. :)
Posted by Terris 14 years ago Report
This was well written. I don't care for cooking and such, but I will admit that it was well done indeed. I thought the end was fitting. Rena deserved to survive, because she was one of those kinds of people who always seem to. Thank you for sharing it.
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Well, some people might disagree with the "cooking" label, since it's just a quick-fry dragon-breath Barbecue. ;) But I figured that was the best way to tag what happened in the story.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by icn 14 years ago Report
interesting
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
heh, glad you thought so ^^
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
OMG, I loved that ending! This was very out of character for you and "dragon and the damsel" themes. I loved it!
Makes me want to ask about how the war went >_>
You have stirred an idea within me with this one...
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Was it out of character, really? Can you not think of another "dragon and damsel" story I submitted to the EPWG wherein the damsel survived? :P
Glad I could entertain and inspire you. The war... well, that was never a concern to me. But the Emperor let her go, and for that reason she would likely spare at least him. Realistically she'd wipe out his empire instead... or would she?
Let's say she has the greatest powers, but the largest number of dragons is in his empire. If he kills enough dragons and lets his underlings touch the blood first... well, Rena would wipe out any lesser wizard, but wouldn't be able to resist a horde of them, perhaps. LEt's say it was enough of a stalemate to force a lasting peace. For a while. :P
...And I know I have yet to get to yours...
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
"...And I know I have yet to get to yours..."
I won't prosecute, you have your own RL problems.
And if i had the money I'd pay you for a longer version of that history, since I'm struggling just to prepare submissions for EPWG preventing me from "stealing" your little idea here and adding my own "what if" history to it XD
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
You know, I don't mind you setting stories in my deranged little world; my only request is that you try to keep them as faithful to my other works as possible. Realistically I have to say this one has to be set in the same "dimension" as, say, the Ambassadors of the Flesh series, for example... just on a distant continent. Heck their world may even be flat for all I know. ;P
A quick note; while I personally favor women-as-prey stories (or as slaves, or... various naughty happenings-to-them :P), and usually have males involved, I've never said there's no such thing as googirls for example. Everything can exist there, I just don't always focus on some of it. :D
I should send you a list of guidelines to respect, but otherwise I have no problem with you setting something in the worlds I've created.
Posted by DanK 14 years ago Report
Excellent story! I knew it would be different than the 'typical' vore story within the first few paragraphs. Inventive ways to stuff (I mean, snuff) a girl, too.
Posted by KavenBach 14 years ago Report
Lol, Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Well, an interesting story.