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A little request I did for Gregole for being a consistent fan of my works. I really appreciated her continued comments and so I did this short comic for her as a gift.
It's her character Ryla nomming on Ralmar's witch girl Amari. I've been super sick lately so the coloring is a bit off and rushed, so apologies for that. Amari's hair came out redder than I planned for. Tried out a new style of noses for this work and I really like the way it turned out. I'll probably stick with it.
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Posted by UltimaSlash 14 years ago Report
Awesome and clever drawing. Well done.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Thanks, panel four is my personal favorite.
Posted by UltimaSlash 14 years ago Report
Very nice placement, shading, and facial expressions in that panel. I can totally see why that's your favorite panel ^^.
Posted by Mr_Iddi 14 years ago Report
Very well made, I likes it. ^^
And I dont know what you're talking about with the colours, looks great to me.
Then again... maybe Im not the best judge o colour, heh. Either way. Very nice
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Technically the colors are fine in terms of cohesion and such, but considering I'm working with an established character, they came out a bit off.
Glad you like it though. :D
Posted by didhejustsaythat 14 years ago Report
off nothing, this picture is glorious. the facial expressions are superb.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Haha, thanks man, glad you like it. :)
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
Really like the expressions and poses of the two characters. Really gives a feel of motion in the picture.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Thanks. :D
Looking back on my older works they always appeared static and lifeless so I've been working on my flow.
Posted by Bitter 14 years ago Report
That expression in the last panel is just heart-melting.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
I drew and redrew that panel over and over until I finally came up with that expression. Glad it was worth it.
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
It most definitely was! This is an awesome image--you clearly put not only effort but also a great deal of skill into your work. Thanks for doing so much work! :)
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
What an ironic thing to say, considering her victim's fate! :D :D :D
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
I refuse to draw a vore scene without a snarky pred remark. :p
Posted by Ralmar 14 years ago Report
Bwahahaha! Love it! Why can't more awesome people conspire to do this sort of thing to my characters?
Posted by Ralmar 14 years ago Report
Also, Amari is utterly adorable, as is Ryla. I'd love to see standalone pics of them, not in any sort of vorish situation. Regardless, VERY well done. Creator approved. ^^
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
I was kinda nervous that I had misinterpreted Amari. Glad you approve and like it. :D
Posted by Ralmar 14 years ago Report
Well, you've done some splendid work with her. She looks amazing as you've drawn her. And, well, besides that, Gregole is the one who drew her aged-up in the first place, and I approved that. Ya did good. :3
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Eh, what can I say? I've always had a thing for witch girls. It's quirky. :p
Posted by giggityman69 14 years ago Report
Love your stuff man.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Glad you like it. :D
Posted by Paraffine 14 years ago Report
That's really a funny magic trick :)
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Been known to get a rise or two.
Posted by Houyo 14 years ago Report
This will always be my favorite magic trick. I'll have to try practicing it some time.
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Difficult to master but never-ending fun. :p
Posted by BlackRose 14 years ago Report
Thats always a good trick :D
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Just like spinning.
Posted by Ashley_Urikoshima 14 years ago Report
I think shot 2 of Amari has to be my favourite of these! :3 It just really makes her seem... naive enough to end up becoming a belly-bulge XD The whole comic is brilliant, though <3
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Thanks. :D I enjoy drawing facial expressions and wanted to give Amari as much personality as I could.
Posted by Squidia 14 years ago Report
Ryla also knows how to saw a person in half, though she's not so good at the putting them back together part...
I commented on this on DA, but as I told you, I'm OCD, so I'm doing so again.
I really love how each of them shines with their own unique features. I can tell Amari is a teenager and Ryla's a young adult. And I like how you can pick up subtle bits of their heritage. Ryla looks like a softcore goth, and Amari has that teenage witch thing, with just a bit of traditional witch, with the way her hat comes to a Tim Burton spiral.
I also love how they move between panels, as I've already mentioned. This is just a very alive comic.
I love how puzzled Amari looks, how manic and probably drunk Ryla is, and how contented she is in the final panel. And I love how she's just kind of... basking in her fullness. It's so much the kind of thing she'd do.
All in all, you've brought a dimension to both characters that I really wish I could. I've often used some of your work as a model with my own art, and this reminds me why.
If you don't mind, I'd like to display it on Ryla's ETA profile.
Posted by psvorefan1520 14 years ago Report
This is quite a lot better than a lot of stuff that's out there.
But something about it is pulling me away to an area of dislike... I can't figure out particularly what but this drawing kind of freaks me out somehow. I don't know if it's the style or what, but it's there.
Since I can't say I like it I prolly won't say good job, and the only advice I can think of is not to try when you're super-sick, because I checked real quick to see if it was the style that was freaking me out and it didn't seem to have the same effect. Seems to be only this particular drawing.
Ah well. Good luck on the rest of your works.