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Liza's Story
Chapter 7: The Intestinal Investigator
Written by Indighost © 2012
Description:
46 pages. 75% porn. What’s this story about? F/fucking everything. Vore, stuffing, and otherwise. Sex (3.5 scenes, straight and lesbian), unaware MILF fulltour, micro endo, unbirth, furry, object swallowing, a bit of bdsm, accidental romance, digestion, indigestion, two scat scenes, and of course a little bit of drama. Basically, our furry friends help the police investigate some vicious predators.
For new readers: The setting is a cartoonish furry North America, where magic exists alongside modern technology. This is a super perverse, super depraved, drawn-out, melodramatic vore and stuffing and endosomatophilia story. There is lots of everything. You have been warned!
*Scat Haters: If you can survive the fart on page 15, there's nothing further until page 33.
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Posted by Skittles209 12 years ago Report
Yay a new story! I like this one XD.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I know you will man x3
Posted by Kharon 12 years ago Report
As much as I don't like some of the stuff advertised (e.g. unbirth, furry) this is still a story by you, so I'm probably gonna read it anyways! That's what I like about a complicated story, I can enjoy it even when the actual scene doesn't match my fetishes.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I really appreciate the good faith. If it turns out you dont enjoy it, feel free to give me a critique on how the story could be better.
Posted by Stalbon 12 years ago Report
I'll keep my eye on this.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
:D thanks. looking forward to your thoughts whwnever you have time.
Posted by Lithalya 12 years ago Report
I enjoyed reading this over. I won't give away spoilers in the comments for others that haven't read it yet, but it's definitely more emotional than previous chapters. I enjoyed that, though it's left me feeling a bit sad toward the end. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thanks so much for your comment Lithalya! I am glad to hear it has an emotional aspect. I'll do my best in the next chapter (2 left) to retain dramatic tension without putting people out of character--not revealing exactly what will happen of course.
Posted by coaster14 12 years ago Report
i must say that your ability to make me care for a your character blows my mind when reading at times.and even with the onset of magic and vore in this universe it still feels so natural how you wrote out what the characters where going through when eating.
keep up the awesome work
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
you too coaster ;)
Posted by SapphyAngely 12 years ago Report
I really appreciated the read. I'm not the biggest fan of the scat parts - tend to avoid them. But the characters, writing and general descriptions were very nice. You definitely put the reader into the world temporarily.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thanks! To tell the truth, with this storyline, i'm starting to enjoy writing the plot parts more than the porny (such as they may be) parts :3
Posted by Sora 12 years ago Report
Finally got around to reading this and I gotta tell ya Indighost, when I see a nice long story like this from you I can barely contain my excitement. I relish every word. Your Liza's Story is one of the best series I have ever read without a doubt. It contains characters and a plotline of unmatched eroticism and I profoundly thank you for sharing it with us!
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
my pleasure :) 12 pages of chapter 8 is done.
Posted by 149darry 9 years ago Report
i came here directly by putting in unbirth, furry in the search bar. this. is. EPIC!
Posted by Indighost 9 years ago Report
:-) enjoy
Posted by 149darry 9 years ago Report
@W@ yessss....