Posted by mach-one 12 years ago Report

Wow, i remembered you as a very good writer, specially considering that English is not your first language.
However, i was impressed by the level of English you have acquired lately, better than the stories i read some time ago.

As for the stories themselves, they were quite entertaining. You really can make the most of Felarya xD
Though, after reading the second story i think that meybe you could create a really great, less vore-focused universe that would be a better scenario for similar pieces of writing, in case you haven't done that.

Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report

Thanks. The vore background was important to the second story, though, since that was the reason why the fairies were hunting the humans.

Posted by mach-one 12 years ago Report

Yeah, but vore is the base of Felarya. It'd be pointless to use the world without vore in mind.

Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report

Awwww. I felt sorry for the humans in the first one, but loved the cunning of the fairy. But that second one... I was sure the dryad would eat the young fairy to end her misery. Damn you sadism bone!

Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report

Heh. That's not what Shelny does. Sorry to disappoint! ;)

As for the humans in the first story: It's difficult not to feel sorry for them, yes. But I suppose it's all for a good cause: a happy, satisfied fairy. ;)

Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report

I really enjoyed this. Just as always, you did excellent work explaining the poitn of view of the pond fiary culture. In story 1, the hunting scene in particular flowed very well and was easy to imagine. In story 2, the fairies child-like attitude towards predation was explained very well.

Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report

Thanks. Fairies (at least in those locations) are simple beings, though they can be quite clever, and they have a full range of emotions which they can feel quite intensely.