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Tags: Abuse BDSM canada Canine Cow cruelty Crying Digestion Doe Dog Domination Dragon Drama F/various Fart Female Full tour Furry Horse Inverse Blowjob kindness Lactation Lesbian Love maieusiophilia Micro Non-consensual Oral Vore Pony Regurgitation Reluctant Predator Same Size Scat Sex Soft Vore Stuffing tears torture violence
2013-11-27: UPDATED WITH A FEW EXTRA SCENES...secretly
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Liza's Story, #9 : And She Swallowed Her Fears
Written by Indighost, 2012 [email protected]
All characters © Indighost, 2011
* To skip straight to the VORE, press and search for the word “turncoat”.
This is the final showdown of the story of the dragon-devouring cow: The hero must do battle with the leaders of the predator gang--by trying to eat all of them, naturally. >:3 38 pages of Female Predators, F/FMMMFmmfFMmmM, Furry, over-stuffing, violence, drama, consenusal and non-consensual sexual scenes, digestion, and a scat scene at the end clearly demarcated with ****** (although there are a few farts here and there, and there are a few final paragraphs of plot after that).
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* This is an extremely pornographic story written for fetishists.
* Setting: Cartoonish Furry Canada. Modern technology & sorcery.
* In case it isn't blindingly obvious, this is not intended to be a realistic depiction of anything whatsoever.
* 95% of the scat is at the very end of the story (though the last few paragraphs are plot).
* If you are unfamiliar with words such as “tabarnak”, you may wish to watch this educational video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sniMbSEzsg&feature=related
* Music to be played during the Epilogue: http://ia700201.us.archive.org/1/items/2000-06-12.paf.fm.unknown.5887.sbeok.flacf/phil00-06-12t1_vbr.mp3
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Posted by Luckless 12 years ago Report
I really loved the unwilling vore scene. A couple's last struggles is a theme that should be delved into further.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thank you! I put as many different types of vore into this as i could think of. Hopefully in this series I've covered most of everything under F/* :)
Posted by Lithalya 12 years ago Report
A quite excellent read. Well done. :)
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I was very nervous about posting this, thinking it was too emotional, but it's very nice to hear that you enjoyed it Lithalya :)
Posted by Dracon_Kitsune 12 years ago Report
Very nice work, I love it like all your others. Hmm, is this the end of the arc, or the end end?
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thank you so much! Regarding the end, I will not write any more about the main or secondary characters. I may rp with Laura as a predator later though, but I feel that overall with this series I have said all that I intended to say in the context of furry vore.
Posted by Sora 12 years ago Report
A satisfying end to one of my favorite series. My melancholy at this being the last is tempered by the fact that I know you will go on to compose even greater works (if that is possible). I bid a fond farewell to Liza and Mary Jane, and I will no doubt return to reread these in the times to come! Bravo Indighost! I await your next epic!
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thank you so much for your loyalty sora and your kind comments!! When I finished this, I looked back with a surprised and realized I had written almost 200 pages (or thereabotus, not exxactly sure.) I concluded that if I can write a full-length story like this, in the extremely limited-audience genre of furry vore f/* pornography, and get 10 favorites, perhaps it would be worth my time to try a general-audience work (ie a story about people, violence, and drama, minus the vore, porn, and fur) and see where that takes me,.
Posted by Skittles209 12 years ago Report
The end of the series? :(
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
That's true! But fear not. I had planned this ending roughly from the 3rd chapter. I have left no shoes untied. IF, if if if I write anything else, all the main and secondary characters here will be firmly in the happily ever after camp and no longer participating, i only might write something about the character Laura.
Posted by Skittles209 12 years ago Report
Sidestories? :)
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Could be...I have already imagined the idea for a 20 page sotry about that character...I have other projects that I want to make progress on though. Although I don't know if you have noticed, buut I'm extremely bad at sticking to my project priorrity plans :3
Posted by Skittles209 12 years ago Report
Lol! Everyone does! :)
Posted by Agora 12 years ago Report
I lol'd at the "crisse de tabarnak"!
Guess you didn't need my help coming up with quebecer swearing XD
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I can thank Martin Matte for that :)
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
LOL--That is actually my secret goal...>:] when I first heard about eka's, it was on EncyclopediaDramatica, with people mostly talking about the terrible quality of all the submissions and saying "Bad quality submissions, therefore vore is bad." Anways. It would be very hard for me not to write more vore stories, I am an extremely perverse person :) I am mainly saying that because I about 60% done writing a "normal" novel, and I want to allocate a little more time to that.
Posted by Taris 12 years ago Report
woo! amazing series, just amazing!
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thank you so kindly for reading! :) I am still looking for ways to promote the stories I write, if you think there's anyone else who would enjoy them, let them know!
Posted by Taris 12 years ago Report
You could post these to SoFurry and Furaffinity. Also, bonus of posting them to SoFurry is folks can download it as an ebook!
Posted by Stalbon 12 years ago Report
Considering that this is the finale, I did want to read it through and see how it went. That yet -another- dragon would show up gave me...pause. All in all, I think there's a bit too much all over to get into anything particular. You were trying to cram just as much of everything into the story (and into Liza) as you could.
I was probably too worried about what was coming to really be swept away by the story, and so I am not the best person to hear comments or critique from on this particular piece. Regardless, keep writing what you love. You're definitely doing a better job keeping up with writing than I am!
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Considering that I used the phrase "Dragon-devouring cow" in the item description, I don't think you should be too surprised if a dragon gets devoured :3
Also, there's a name for "trying to cram as much of everything as you can into a predator," it's called "stuffing" and it's also in the description.
So, I'm not sure why you read it. If you are looking for a story about a dragon who eats people, then why don't you write a story about that yourself? If you don't want to do that, then please take a look at this guy (http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/sirrush/) he writes a lot of great predatory dragon/dinosaur/wyvern stories.
Posted by Stalbon 12 years ago Report
I read it because you have a lot of talent, and it's a series I've looked into since I last commented on your works.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
OK. I guess I was just confused by your comment. If you want to criticize the technique, execution, flow, or any plot holes of the story, please feel free, I always appreciate that.
However, if you want to criticize things like the fact that i used an evil dragon, or a sexual fetish like stuffing, (which is the whole reason why i created these characters to begin with), then I don't feel that's a helpful comment, because there are many, many stories on the internet involving dragons in all kinds of roles doing all kinds of different sex things, that you could read instead.
Posted by Stalbon 12 years ago Report
My apologies about any confusion; it was not my intent! To sum my feelings up, it was a finale as best fit the series' feel of stuffing and mass predation. There's absolutely nothing wrong with that. What I attempted to convey was my feelings that by putting so much and so many different types of vore or play in, there was a feel that everything was not played out as thoroughly as it might have been. That, however, could have been an effort on your part not to be bogged down in playing out each and every 'scene' and therefore get behind on finishing the piece. If so, I congratulate you, as I often am at war with myself to give each part of the story a proper amount of detail while not falling into the pit trap of working on a single bit and then not being able to move forward.
As for the rest of what I mentioned, please pay it no mind. I am not your intended reader, I simply wished to finish out the ride. :)
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Oh! Thank you! Now I understand. This is my favorite kind of comment -- very thoughtful and interesting :)
I think you are exactly right. While writing this, there were times when I felt as though, oh no, I want to focus more on the feelings of this paritcular character being eaten, given the relationship he/she had with the main chracter, but I plowed on. This is because I wanted to try writing a story involving an over-stuffing purely of live prey, as opposed to an over-stuuffing of food or other thign (which I had in previous chapters). I do think that it could certainly have been longer, and I certainly could have described things more. however sa I look baack on it, I do not think I would, because I wanted this story to have a decently fast pace. I felt that that might support the cartoon-like undertone of this series a bit better. (In fact, that was one of the hardest task for me: trying to retain some of the essential fun of cartoons that underlies all furry stories while also adding some scary & sad as well as heartwaring moments).
Posted by Mid_Night 12 years ago Report
I must say this its amazing story, are thinking to make a second part?
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Thank you! I might but for now I have just been doing some fun rps with the character Laura. The main characters here are mostly retired (they need a rest! :)
Posted by Mid_Night 12 years ago Report
ok then, but there i something you need to do, just put all Liza's story chapters in one folder that way it's easier to track the chapter, well the truth i was reading the chapters of Liza's story when suddenly i find myself reading another story i get confuse for a moment after reading the first words of first line to know it's not a chapter of Liza's story.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
good idea! I'll do that after work today.
Posted by Mid_Night 12 years ago Report
ok then :) well i will be looking forward for more of your stories.
Posted by gersen 10 years ago Report
In what chapter Lisa was swallowed by Mary Jane?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
None. The opposite happened several times including the first.
Posted by gersen 10 years ago Report
Why?
Posted by zoroark720 5 years ago Report
just found this but I wish I could have read more about the mouse and her cow even if it was not tracing down a pred gang :p
Posted by Indighost 5 years ago Report
Thanks for reading. I have a lot of similar stuff written, not quite done yet.