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Into the Perfect World (F/M) By Bitter -- Report

Uploaded: 12 years ago

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The chosen one of a would-be priestess's cult discovers that heaven can be a hell of its own.

Played by post with the masterful  4ofSwords.

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Jack

Posted by Jack 12 years ago Report

As much as I am waiting for your little project to come alive - good to see that you're still able to enjoy other things besides it.

Was a nice read. Thanks, you two.

Thanatos2k

Posted by Thanatos2k 12 years ago Report

Long start up but good payoff

4ofSwords

Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report

Thanks for posting that! I enjoyed it immensely.

Sehnsucht

Posted by Sehnsucht 12 years ago Report

This story has been creeping into my mind on and off for the past day or so. Got to love a destroying angel. Images that most stuck in my head: Her method of consuming him (very erotic), his confusion as parts are taken from him, and the clear loathing between the two female leads. Having the angel nudge the faun's clothing across the barrier with her foot was a lovely touch.

Thanks for posting!