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This is page 17 of a commission for trh7323
First and for most, I went really overboard on shading the suit. Pretty much took the time drawing this out to practice shading leather/latex. I finished everything and just as I hit save, saw I had a Danger Girl comic laying right next to me, with one of the main girls decked out in leather... *Facepalm* Oh well still like how the shading came out.
I think I kept the breast size the same from the last panel... I think
The only thing I'm really not impressed with is the line work for the last panel. A) It makes the succubus look like more of a giantess compared to the girl. No, she is not becoming a giantess, want to squash any thought of that completely. I even enlarged the girl to keep the right size proportions, but I think it still comes off a little ... off. B) The girl's face is supposed to be squished against the boob, and I just could not get it right. C) I think I made the lower legs of the succubus too short as well... All in all those are my only real complaints about this one.
I need to find a better way to shade nipples too. They eat up just as much time as the leather/latex... Nipples, eating ... Hmm...
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Posted by dinoman514 12 years ago Report
As impressive as ever my friend, keep up the good work it’s nice to know you are still alive out there :D
Posted by Umbrage00 12 years ago Report
Awesome :O Can't wait for the next page ! Keep up the pace and quality ^^
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
I think the time spent on the latex paid off! :)
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
I agree :) I think I could do a little faster next time :)
Posted by Aickavon12 12 years ago Report
yay!
Posted by Putinforgod 12 years ago Report
I hope they don't get digested too soon(or what the heck, I hope they stay undigested forever. Full-time big belly).
We need to see that belly at full capacity.
Posted by sqar 12 years ago Report
First I would like to thank you for your creativity Secondly, I have a suggestion in the Dark Nights work would be the end of the work scat them I believe to be the best in order to be a real Thirdly I wish Download work in a shorter time because I look forward your work Thank you and forgive me for selfish me.
Posted by StalkOBroccoli 12 years ago Report
looks right to me, though you should always strive for greater, just remember that most looking at this is willing to have a bit of suspension of disbelief - this IS a fantasy fetish you know! XD
Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
I think some of the problem might in the perspective.
The succubus sits further back than the girl, but her face is still bigger.
To be honest, it almost looks like the girl is the same size as the succubus' leg.
Also, did she always have a hole in the suit for that tail?
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Well I figured she wasn't that far back so there shouldn't be that big of a difference, but I guess it's true...
OH SHIT I forgot to shade the tail!! Don't Look!!!
Posted by BigD 12 years ago Report
Let's go look at that tail :P
Posted by BigD 12 years ago Report
Don't worry about it, it looks fine-ish.
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
That's cuz I fix'ed it
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 12 years ago Report
Oh succubus preds are just a delight, aren't they? On the note of your concerns, I think everything just looks all right. While there's a slight size difference, it isn't anything major or too notable.
Posted by kain009 12 years ago Report
o m g this is incredibly sexy! :3 keep up the amazing work! cant wait to see the rest.
Posted by joeburp22181 12 years ago Report
Sexy!
Posted by red88 12 years ago Report
MORE!
but really your a great artist, I hope one day I can become as good as you.
Posted by Lindinle 12 years ago Report
Ok 1 about time and good job at that and 2 her boobs have a life of there own
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
2? How so?
Posted by Lindinle 12 years ago Report
They keep growing
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
They didn't get any bigger from the last page
Posted by xblurp 12 years ago Report
All in all a good job, but I feel that another day or two of work on this page would have made it come out better. In the last panel the Succubus's lips aren't colored and in the first I feel like her tail could have just a smaller amount of detail added to it or maybe shading. Compared to everything else it seems so plain. I don't know if those things are wrong or not though. I'm just a viewer lol. And that "Nipples, eating..." hmmmmmmm.
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Wow... didn't even notice the lips. I just uploaded the newer copy fixing the tail right when you commented. And I noticed I didn't do any touch up work on around the face in the last panel either. Again, all fixed. Hopefully they don't look as dull now :)
Posted by sqar 12 years ago Report
I think breast be smaller and belly larger
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
... Always something ... Breasts do tend to look like they've lost size then they're resting on something (Or maybe arching the back makes them look bigger). Just glad I didn't go BE crazy again
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 12 years ago Report
Fuck yeah!
Posted by imalive4ever 12 years ago Report
Love it! Amazing work. You're very skilled in capturing emotion.and the leather came out fantastic. I can see what you mean about the leg, it is a little on the short side but it is an overall impressive piece of work.. Keep it up!
Posted by bbstuff 12 years ago Report
wow! you did an especially beautiful job in shading the crinkles and the blimps
Posted by Vishis 12 years ago Report
Awesome, and I usually prefer dudes, lol. Eat up, you big sexy bitch!
Posted by h0f 12 years ago Report
Woah... just them sitting next to each other on a couch is hot as shit.:P
Just their sizes next to each other. she's so beeeeeeg!
Posted by Rac0r 12 years ago Report
Ooh, nice! Business is about to pick up! Just wondering, how many pages are there left?
Posted by haphazard 12 years ago Report
Amazing job!
Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report
getting better and better XD
Posted by Liz 12 years ago Report
Lovely work indeed. Looking forwards to seeing the scared girl get devoured <3
Posted by oddhis 12 years ago Report
Always the best from Shryland! :D
Posted by mordor12 12 years ago Report
Great art man
Posted by RubytheWitch20 12 years ago Report
it is as great as the first page ^_^
oh i hope the succubus makes the girls trip
into her (if u know what i mean)
Posted by MrSpOnTaNeOuS37 12 years ago Report
Excellent work as always, the quality is definitely shown through your attention to details and shading. That I have noticed keeps getting better with your work. Looking forward to the rest, take your time though, haha.
Posted by MetalNazo 12 years ago Report
can't wait to see how big she'll get!
Posted by Max_C 12 years ago Report
Dude you just keep upping your game. You've raised the bar so high I don't know how you're ever going to top it.
The time spent on the latex really paid off. I've tried my hand at latex a couple of times. Never came anywhere close to what you've accomplished here.
That bottom right frame is pure deliciousness. One hand forcing her prey into her giant breast and the other resting on her distended belly. Plus you just keep on getting better with facial expressions. It's remarkable!
Excellent work as always.
Posted by IGA 12 years ago Report
This is insanely good. You blow casual vore art out of the water!! Good lord!