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H/m horse/horse - sex, soft vore. ~9100 words
A young stallion out for a fun weekend with his friends has a secret he keeps to himself, at least until he runs into a much larger mare with a much larger surprise - or two.
This is a bit of a departure for me in terms of content and characters, but it was exactly what I wanted to write, and is a bit of an experiment in following that urge regardless. Saybel belongs to Miranda_Dragon, who graciously consented to her use in the story here.
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Posted by miranda_dragon 11 years ago Report
You are crazy awesome.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I'm really happy you liked it!
Posted by TuxKusanagi 11 years ago Report
Holy crap. I am <i>so</i> glad i watch you.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<grin>
Posted by noego 11 years ago Report
Fantastic one. Thanks!
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Kenkii 11 years ago Report
I loved the pace of this one. Really excellent work C:
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by Terris 11 years ago Report
Good gracious that was an amazingly written story. Not entirely my cup of tea, but the characterizations and descriptive writing drew me in. Well done indeed!
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
In that case, I'm especially glad you liked it. What is your normal cup of tea?
Posted by Terris 11 years ago Report
Post vore is not my thing generally, which is what gave me pause, but the entirety of the story was delicious. I think since your protagonist seemed likable, his demise gave me pause. Given that I've done worse while playing a pred, it must be a mood thing.
And honestly, the actual vore scene in the story, comparing it to a blow job was inspired and sexy as hell. so I guess I'll revise my comment. The only issue I had was the end, but it fit the story!
I've read other stories of yours. You're a good writer. This is one I'm very likely going to come back to.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Ahh - yeah, that's a nod to the tastes of Saybel's person. Whenever I write a story for Miranda Dragon, I include that. And terrible things happening to likable prey is more my trademark. ;)
I'm glad you liked it, though, and thanks!
Posted by kowkushion 11 years ago Report
whats with the "a class" and "c class" stuff
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
It's a convention I use in this setting. A-class creatures are small - from mouse-size to small house-cat size. B-class are mid-sized, large house-cat to small deer. C-class are larger. So the animals reference their original source species' sizes, but still interact in a society made to accommodate everyone.
Posted by kowkushion 11 years ago Report
ok so they're all anthros but at different sizes
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Correct.